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I thought I was a poet who had a pen of gold With clear access to writing that was mature and bold. I thought I could go roaming beside the foaming sea And watch the seagulls gliding to give a show for free. I thought I was a poet who walked along the beach In awe I stood and wondered, my hand stretched out to reach The silver thread dividing the water from the sky And traced Selena’s features as slowly she went by. I thought I was a poet who knew what joy could be On hearing water roaring cascading down with glee. I looked for inspiration, experienced utmost thrill When climbing down the valley or up the verdant hill. I thought I was a poet in charge of heat and cold But lost my true emotions when I was duped and told I had to reach perfection to please my heart and mind By means of imitation. My soul I left behind. I thought I was a poet who had a pen of gold But now all of a sudden I’m weary, frail and old. I thought I was a poet. My pen is of no use. With teary eyes I whisper to my dejected muse. ------------------------------------------------------------- Contest: First Place Only Sponsor: Laura Loo Placed 1st ~ 18th June 2016 Contest: Any Poem #36 Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placed 1st ~ 13th March 2016 Contest: Million Dollar Poem Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placed 1st ~ 13th June 2015 Chosen Poem of the day ~ 8th May 2015

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Date: 8/15/2023 9:59:00 PM
I love that refrain” i thought i was a poet” and the imagery here is so soft and seamless. Especially the silver thread line blew me away. I love your use of rhymes and flow of this poem is impeccable. Very well crafted. And i can see why this is one of the best poems ever. Well deserved
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Date: 8/20/2023 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and insightful comments, Ink Empress. It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance, especially after looking up your posts and seeing what you have on offer. ~ Best regards // paul
Date: 12/15/2022 3:32:00 PM
I feel fortunate to find this gem, Paul - I am touched by the hauntingly amazing lines of your poetic creation. "I thought I was a poet" - this recurring line is true for many of us, but you are a truly gifted one. Belated congratulations on this poem being included in "Hundred All-time Best" list. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 12/17/2022 11:01:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by with such lovely words, Mala. Sometimes we doubt ourselves, but there is no other way except 'forward'! Warm regards & happy weekend // paul
Date: 11/15/2022 9:45:00 PM
What a beautiful poem and the words haunt me too. Fortunately I never listened to the person who berated me. Daughter of an English teacher, she spoke of the structure, tenet, timbre and techniques that go into writing a poem - or (said sneeringly) being a poet. That was 5 years ago and I still write in verse. I don’t call myself a poet. Others do. People who read my works are touched by it. Am I a poet? No. Do I write poems? Yes. Enjoy what you do, for you. Sharing is a bonus.
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Date: 11/18/2022 1:30:00 AM
Good morning and thank you for stopping by with encouraging & insightful comments, Thomas. I write for my own benefit, but am always willing to share and receive feedback. Many times, we have to take comments by armchair critics with a pinch of salt :) Regards // paul
Date: 9/18/2022 10:41:00 AM
I go back to read this when I need to lose myself in something inspirational, and always know I will find it in this piece of art. Today I realized that I have never commented. Paul it paints vivid pictures in my mind. Its always a pleasure to read. Thank you.
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Date: 9/18/2022 11:06:00 AM
It is my turn to thank you for your beautiful comments, Wendy! Your visit is truly appreciated. ~ Best regards // paul
Date: 6/29/2022 9:34:00 AM
Stunningly magnificent! I wish I had read this sooner.....I feel your poetry reflects the haunting echoes of all poets, of the sometimes drought for expression. I think that is a rarity for you. You always impress. :)Paulette
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Date: 7/9/2022 5:09:00 AM
Thank you for the insightful / complimentary feedback, Paulette. Always a pleasure to have you stopping by. Regards // paul
Date: 3/29/2022 8:25:00 AM
Paul, I am reading this just now for the first time. Wonderful are the verses! I love" I thought I was a poet in charge of heat and cold But lost my true emotions when I was duped and told I had to reach perfection to please my heart and mind By means of imitation. My soul I left behind" Your soul is alive and well my friend! You express yourself with full color and vibrance and depth of emotion. so many wins with this poem. A much belated congratulations on all ! Hugs to you, Susan :)
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Date: 5/21/2022 5:03:00 AM
Hi Susan. I only realized today (by accident) that you had commented here. Thank you for the insightful feedback and congrats, my friend. Enjoy the weekend...hugs // paul
Date: 10/6/2021 3:50:00 PM
What a fun read. It keeps winning, humble mood is endearing.
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Date: 5/21/2022 2:50:00 AM
Thank you, Karen. Pls excuse the very late reaction to your visit; lack of notifications has a lot to do with it. Have a lovely weekend // paul
Date: 9/4/2021 8:23:00 PM
Such a lovely poem penned by a true poet And, your rhyme is perfect! A joy to read.
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Date: 9/6/2021 6:38:00 AM
It is a joy to read you lovely complimentry comments, Ann...thank you!! ~ Best regards // paul
Date: 8/31/2021 2:41:00 PM
Judging by this wonderful work Paul "The Poet Who Never was" should read "The Poet who will always be."
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Date: 9/1/2021 1:16:00 AM
Thank you, Gary, for your lovely and encouraging comments....much appreciated. Regards // paul
Date: 3/6/2021 9:50:00 AM
Paul, I love this poem for the fine qualities the pen and poet possesses. Your reality resonates well, life's despair and all that it expresses. -Richard
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Date: 3/10/2021 6:06:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Richard. Hope you're keeping well and safe. Regards // paul
Date: 1/14/2021 9:04:00 AM
An incredible beautiful work. This poem will be read, remembered, and quoted long after you have gone! Congratulations on all the recognitions!!!
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:06:00 AM
Thank you on all counts; your comments are truly appreciated. Best regards // paul
Date: 12/8/2020 11:22:00 PM
I thought I was a poet, has a lot of great imagery plus its writers feelings. Hugs Eve
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/12/2020 6:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. Pleased to have you checking out an old poem of mine:) Hugs // paul
Date: 11/18/2020 8:58:00 AM
This reminds me of the works of Robert Frost. Incredible!
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Date: 11/21/2020 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for all the complimentary comments, Stephanie! I am humbled by your generosity! Pleased to make your acquaintance. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 11/18/2020 8:55:00 AM
Breathtaking and beautiful!
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Date: 11/21/2020 1:58:00 PM
:) Thank you...
Date: 12/29/2019 3:10:00 PM
Hello Paul Callus, this poem is beautiful. I enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my fiend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/31/2019 12:48:00 PM
Happy New Year Paul. I hope you had a good Christmas. Regards Darlene
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/30/2019 8:24:00 AM
I am so pleased you enjoyed it, Charlene...thank you! All the best // paul
Date: 11/21/2019 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. I love your comments :) Regards & Blessings // paul
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Date: 11/21/2019 3:53:00 PM
Enjoyable, relatable with some great wording and thought
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Date: 12/30/2019 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Edmund; your words are most encouraging. Regards // paul
Date: 11/21/2019 1:58:00 PM
I see why this poem won 3 contests! Great rhyme and cadence. Don't doubt your skill as a poet. Blessings, Susan
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Date: 12/30/2019 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. I love your comments :) Regards & Blessings // paul
Date: 11/19/2019 10:40:00 PM
I liked the rhythm of this poem. A wonderful poem by a very talented poet. :)
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Date: 11/21/2019 3:26:00 PM
Your comments are very much appreciated, Valerie...thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 11/19/2019 3:12:00 AM
I reckon that as a poet, you stand tall in a forest,a long-lived individual, with decades of "rings" of experience...dont ever " chop" yourself down as a poet - I'm so glad I read this today, Paul -sensitive soul that you are- honest and observant - your muse has aged gracefully, and as a mentor to young 'uns...stands tall! Warm regards, Aqua M.
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Date: 11/21/2019 3:25:00 PM
Thank you, Aqua...I love your complimentary comments...if you take a closer look you'll see that I'm growing wings:) Warm regards // paul
Date: 11/18/2019 11:24:00 PM
Hello Paul. You are a really gifted poet, I liked the poem very much, I myself have posted 100 poems myself and realise the more work you do the better it gets. Poetry is an art form like painting it has to be admired to be enjoyed. All the best to you for the coming Christmas and thanks for this wonderful poem. John
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Date: 11/21/2019 3:09:00 PM
Hi John...I thought I had already replied to your comment, but I see that I have nothing to show for it! Thank you so much for your meaningful feedback; also pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul
Date: 11/18/2019 9:23:00 PM
You're a poet in my book -- and an excellent one at that!
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Date: 11/20/2019 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Arlene; your generous comments are appreciated. Regards // paul
Date: 11/18/2019 9:21:00 PM
You're a poet in my book -- and an excellent one at that!
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Date: 11/15/2019 9:43:00 AM
Excellent poem well done
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Date: 11/15/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thank you, Anna; pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul
Date: 2/20/2019 6:14:00 AM
I love this poem it's perfect!
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Date: 2/20/2019 8:04:00 AM
That is very kind of you, Krystle...thank you. Pleased to make your acquaintance :) Regards // paul
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