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When attention is soft and heart mellow, the sounds of silence oft invades our form, pervading presence, igniting soul's glow, felt vividly as blissful currents warm. Vaporised self's swept away in this storm, shaping in our head words sent from heaven but if we take this boon as a given, the music slips through fissures in our mind; thus unless the void remains our haven, these gifts from beyond we must leave behind. 07-October-2022

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Date: 10/20/2022 10:09:00 AM
"Fissures in our mind," "void remains our haven" just two of your amazing images of the "gifts" left behind Seeker! What a wonderful description of the poems we leave behind - maybe permanently and, just maybe, waiting for a resurrection of sorts. I always come away from your poems with bundles of thoughts to ponder. Thank you for that gift. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Date: 10/20/2022 6:42:00 PM
Thank you dear Sam ~ your kind comments are so overwhelming! :)
Date: 10/15/2022 1:56:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts, Seeker. Yes, we must be grateful, and also quick to write them lest we forget!
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Date: 10/15/2022 7:14:00 PM
Yes, since attention oscillates :)
Date: 10/15/2022 12:46:00 PM
Love the wistfulness of gifts we must leave behind, congratulations on your win-
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Date: 10/15/2022 7:13:00 PM
Thank you Michelle ~ all that is, is a wave in the vast ocean of consciousness
Date: 10/15/2022 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the win. Those "words sent from heaven" are sometimes nebular at best. Nicely done.
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Date: 10/15/2022 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Andy
Date: 10/15/2022 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in his contest, dear friend. You amply deserve it with your greatly penned poem.
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Date: 10/15/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thank you, Sotto!
Date: 10/15/2022 9:42:00 AM
Seeker, a wonderful Dizain poem and fitting for Craig's theme, congratulations on your win in his contest, blessings Constnce
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Date: 10/15/2022 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Constance! Never expected to be on the winners list
Date: 10/6/2022 10:49:00 PM
I'm sure we will see them posted some day.
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Date: 10/7/2022 12:47:00 AM
As the old adage goes ~ we cannot cross the same river twice

Book: Shattered Sighs