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The Peephole That Is the Moon

An infinite door of midnight blue; glowing peephole that is the moon. Dare I look before turned to dust? Yes, dear friend, I surely must. In the midst, a city of finest gold, large as the earth; immense and bold. Quoins of pearl, this must be known, the lusture seemed a life, it's own. Rising from it, a mountainous temple; whisps of prayers escape the steeple. Without the city, fields of crystal flowers, and trees more akin to wind chime towers. Platinum trunks doning metalic leaves. Angelic music when brushed with their wings. Out from all this, layers of various planes seemingly worlds of their own, yet all of the same. Once starving children and homeless ones too, with comforts of home; endless tables of food. One plane of great sports, children running free; prosthetics and wheelchairs, now trophies and glee. Another, Indian braves running with buffalo, women laughing carefree with children in tow. Serene planes of beaches and tropical breezes. On none was found pain, lameness or diseases. Thousands of planes, but my favorite to view; families and the ancients with no need of adieu. So euphoric, this sight, but there is more to tell, as three glorious chimes of the great temple bell. All froze still as beams of golden light transported them to the temple in quiet. The most beautiful prayers and songs arose. From within the city; pure love aglow. Three bells again and all were beamed out; some to the same planes, some different routes. I wanted so badly, to open the door and be in this place forever more, but the door was locked and I had no key, then an angel turned and flew towards me. Approaching the peephole, that is the moon, It said, "Don't worry, you'll be here soon." I have need of a key, I began to implore, and it slipped a note neath the midnight door. I unfolded the note; three lines within, and three nails fell out; payment of sin. The first line proclaimed, the door was faith. The second; the beams are God's loving grace. Overcome by peace as I read the third line. Jesus is the way, the truth and the light, and I remembered a scripture that so sweetly states; "For by grace, through faith, are ye saved."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/25/2015 11:52:00 AM
Such an awe inspiring poem Arlene. Which truly makes me feel embarrassed about what I initially thought when I read the title. All I could conceive was the crescent shaped one on an outhouse. I told you I was embarrassed! Peace. :)
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Date: 2/14/2015 3:51:00 AM
Wow Arlene, you certainly were inspired with the light of God. Such a beautiful poem you have written here. A glimpse into the love of God that transported me to happiness. You truly did touch me with this 7 and I will add it to my favorites so that I can read it often. Thank you, my friend..... Robert.
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Date: 2/10/2015 10:54:00 AM
First thing the title:The Peephole that is the Moon obsessed me. O my God what a title! Not a gross world as if a divine performance of the concerto. Love Arlene>>>rajat
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Arlene Smith
Date: 2/10/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rajat my dear friend!!... When the moon has a ring around it on a dark night, that's what it looks like to me... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 2/10/2015 8:40:00 AM
Oh this is a fav! Filled with love and light and heavenly images that everyone can share.
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 2/11/2015 7:39:00 AM
Posted a poem the other day.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 2/10/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, so much, sweet Monterey!... I am waiting for a new one from you!!... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 2/9/2015 9:58:00 AM
Wow, I am in awe by your glimpse of Heaven! Just beautiful, Arlene...I second what Connie wrote below...more than worthy of POD. The last stanza amazing and ending with two of my favorite Bible verses...a fav for me! Hugs, Rhonda
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Arlene Smith
Date: 2/9/2015 3:58:00 PM
Thank you so much sweetie! I so appreciate your generous comments and encouragement!... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 2/9/2015 7:13:00 AM
a great pen Arlene, fav 7... lov, nad
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Arlene Smith
Date: 2/9/2015 3:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Nadiya!... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 2/8/2015 8:38:00 PM
This jewel is truly a great write. I am adding this one to my fav list. A 7 and what a joy to read tonight!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 2/8/2015 9:42:00 PM
So happy you enjoyed it, Robert my friend.. Thank you so much for such generous comments... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 2/8/2015 8:08:00 PM
Your poem is worthy of being POTD Arlene. Your fourth stanza held me spell bound until the end. It matters not what religion a person is, there is such love expressed in this poem with the insight and expression of a visionary. I bow to your talent! I am fav'ing this beautiful poem. 7+
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Arlene Smith
Date: 2/8/2015 9:40:00 PM
Connie, I am truly humbled by your lovely, most generous comments... Thank you so much, dear friend... Hugs.. Arlene

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