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The Pearls In the Ocean

My mother is like the ocean She gives a lot of devotion So around her neck I put pearls perfect For all her heart's emotion Syllables: 8,8,8 5,5

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Date: 12/15/2022 8:24:00 PM

Another fine limerick - a grand salute to mom. Best wishes, Brian

Justin Abdool
Date: 12/20/2022 7:37:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. I love her so much

Date: 12/7/2022 12:23:00 PM

Lovely piece for Mom. Like it! ~;o)

Justin Abdool
Date: 12/8/2022 3:38:00 PM

Thank you, Arlo.

Date: 12/7/2022 8:05:00 AM

Lovely tribute to your Mother Justin. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Justin Abdool
Date: 12/8/2022 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. I'm just fine and dandy and I hope you are doing well too.

Date: 12/7/2022 7:49:00 AM

What a sweet tribute to your mother!

Justin Abdool
Date: 12/7/2022 7:53:00 AM

Thanks, Jen! I love her very much.