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The One That Got Away

Eyes mist in memories of your magical smile. Did you forget me, I wonder? Would we have been friends if nothing else? Lost in time, I search the sky and see your face in clouds, hear your voice in soft rain showers. Our laughter still hangs on warm breezes of summer like a sentimental love song so long ago. Holding my hand, you bathed me in your glow. The afternoon sun dimmed in the light of you. One kiss sent me spinning in your orbit, and my world collided with yours. Like a stone sinking to your ocean floor, I never wanted to surface. We spent every waking moment together – one breath, one voice, one path, one love. Our youthful dream was a fantasy, one I never wanted to awaken from, although many tried to shake me from its grip. Eternally, I would have climbed to your mountaintop to entwine myself in the soulful essence of your earth and sky. If only you had stayed, I may have loosened our threads to find my own breath, or more likely, I would have held my breath longer just to be another note in your melody. We will never know now what might have been then. You changed our destiny, my light source, and my trajectory. We thought our love was written in the starlight of our days and nights - always present, always true, always leading us to each other. Now, I am married to another, but I often wonder… Written 7/7/20 Contest - The One That Got Away Sponsor - Silent One

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Date: 7/8/2020 5:24:00 PM
You carried me to your world.. the magic of love.. the sweetness of the dream.. the unfathomable fate.. a true beauty! Congratulations on your outshining placement, Rhonda! So much enjoyed the read! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Besma! Your comments are always so kind and uplifting. Much love and blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/8/2020 4:44:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Rhonda, showing great imagery and insightful thought making every line memorable. Hope all well with you, Blessings always,Gordon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. I hope all is well with you, too. Much love and blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/8/2020 11:02:00 AM
"The heart has its reasons of which reasons know nothing. " Beautiful piece, perfectly crafted. Touchy indeed!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi! I appreciate your kind visit. Much love and blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 9:11:00 PM
Well expressed and incredibly written, Dear Rhonda. Stay safe!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! You stay safe, too. Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 7/7/2020 9:06:00 PM
WOW and double WOW!! ! This is simply breathtaking - every word and every thought - each word is a gentle touch that embraces the reader with such tremendous delight and fulfillment!!! I am surely faving this!!! It's absolutely wonderful! I love it!!!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, Gina! You are so kind, and I'm grateful for the fave. Much love and blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 5:34:00 PM
Splendidly done, Rhonda--congrats on your podium win in Silent's contest.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/7/2020 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay...I appreciate your kind comments. Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 5:07:00 PM
wow, its like you opened the curtain of the past and stepped right in it. What amazing fiat you achieved dear poet, winning wishes are being send , stay well, and keep writing these jewels . I am indeed impressed. xo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/7/2020 7:00:00 PM
Thanks, Vie...your comments are always kind and lovely. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 4:01:00 PM
Big Congratulations.. Panagiota Sounds like me in the Golden Gate Bridge Poem)) but mine, far less simple.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/8/2020 10:59:00 PM
Oh great, if you do read it,please comment? Panagiota xx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/7/2020 6:59:00 PM
Thanks, Panagiota. You are so kind. I'm going to read your Golden Gate poem tonight. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 3:00:00 PM
Well done, and congratulations! Women dream wonderful dreams and are never satisfied until they see their first love turned out to be fat, bald, and homeless! Aloha! Rico
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/7/2020 6:58:00 PM
LOL...my husband is my first love, so I can't relate to that. I would never want anyone to be homeless...bald maybe. Thanks for the visit, Rico. Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 2:50:00 PM
Love how beautifully you put forth those questions which nobody could answer without getting nostalgic. Young love never seems to be forgotten. Congratulations on your win Rhonda! Much love :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/7/2020 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi. A purely fictional write. :) Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 10:13:00 AM
So many wonderful lines, Rhonda - "One kiss sent me spinning in your orbit". I think my favorite is "Just to be another note in your melody". Dreamy and magical, just like young love. You captured it well. Congratulations on your win ~ John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/7/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thank you, John. This is completely fiction, but I can easily imagine those feelings of heartbreak. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 9:24:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Rhonda, this is such a beautiful love story. I suppose we all have similar stories and ask ourselves "what if." I thought it best to keep my story to myself rather than write it down. My best to you. Hugs, John
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/7/2020 11:37:00 AM
Wow, love CAN last forever, this is even a better love story than your poem...first, last, and only. :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/7/2020 10:21:00 AM
Thanks, John. It's complete fiction. My husband was and is my first love. We've been together since I was 16 and he was 18. I just imagined what it would have felt like if I lost him. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/7/2020 9:22:00 AM
We never stop wondering, and there are times when something will remind us of the one that got away.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/7/2020 10:18:00 AM
Thank you for the placement, Silent! This poem is fiction, but I could easily imagine what it would feel like if I lost my love. Blessings, Rhonda xx

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