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The Old Soldier

The picture stared down at the old man Good times, friends for life The decomposing body was in its second year now The dust and webs had cloaked him like a blanket Giving him comfort that life denied him Time ago, they would have classed him as a hero, time ago The black van took him away Eventually releasing the body for burning The prayers were brief His final epitaph came when the council cleared the house The picture was the last to go in the skip Glancing at it, the worker remarked to his colleague Old soldier.

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Date: 5/20/2024 3:24:00 AM
Dear Paul, such a well written, poignant write. Truly awful to think of someone dying alone, ‘ The dust and webs had cloaked like a blanket’. Sad, haunting image. An old hero who should have been honoured left neglected. This is a very touching poem that makes the reader think and reflect upon how many will be in this awful situation. Real life. Real, true, thoughtful writing.Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 5/9/2024 1:25:00 PM
What makes this even sadder and more disturbing is that this has happened more than once somewhere. : ( Emilia
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Paul Bell
Date: 5/11/2024 3:13:00 AM
Yes, it happens a lot.
Date: 5/9/2024 8:03:00 AM
This is emotionally moving very well written.
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Paul Bell
Date: 5/11/2024 3:17:00 AM
Thanks, Yolanda.
Date: 5/6/2024 4:50:00 PM
what a moving and touching story/poem. I was left speechless. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
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Paul Bell
Date: 5/7/2024 8:46:00 AM
Is a bit sad.

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