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The Old House

An old house Move swiftly when passing by Windows like eyes see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/3/2011 8:19:00 AM
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There's something quite "haunting" about these old houses, Sharon. I love the way you describe how its windows are watching us. Excellent work! So good to be back home and reading your wonderful poetry again. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Robert A. Dufresne
Date: 3/2/2011 5:15:00 PM
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heck of a Haiku, Sharon. Think to the tune of "twilight zone " ....Eerie walking past those empty abodes .... It does feel like someone or ..."thing" .....is watching you !
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Wilma Neels
Date: 3/2/2011 10:21:00 AM
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Sharon I enjoyed the feelings you conjured up with this write of yours.. Love Wilma
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/1/2011 11:51:00 PM
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wow, I really love the feeling this one gives.
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Robert Pettit
Date: 3/1/2011 8:43:00 PM
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I can suddenly hear that old song from the fifties as I read this impressive entry.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 3/1/2011 5:50:00 PM
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Nice visual of the old house, Sharon
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