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The Old Barn Down the Lane

Filtered sunlight swirls through weathered cracks in the walls a winter haven Cat lays in the hay licking kittens as they drink a content tenant Owls and swallows roost keeping watch from the rafters no mice dare scamper Sun sets behind hills eyes open wide and feathers fluff its time for dinner

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Date: 1/21/2024 12:33:00 PM
Four great haiku Jerry, nicely put together..
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Date: 1/21/2024 11:54:00 AM
Hello Jerry Brotherton, no mouse is safe from a cat. i can picture a cat licking a kitten. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 1/21/2024 4:27:00 AM
Jerry, love the imagery, nicely done.
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Date: 1/20/2024 5:48:00 PM
I could actually envision myself at the old barn...reminds me of my mother-in-law's barn It was a serene place with lots of wonderful memories. have a great evening, sara
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