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The Old Barn

In barren fields where once was grown Golden wheat in springtime sown Still stands the barn from long ago The ravages of years it's foe For seasons of neglect atone The whims of natures force are shown Within it's walls her voice well known Once proud timbers forced to bow In barren fields But yet it stands on feet of stone With faded walls and weathered tone Staunch against the winters blow Remembering still the plow and hoe Abandoned it now dwells alone In barren fields

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 173" Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/4/2012 8:23:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/1/2012 4:56:00 PM
congrats on your win Bob
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/2/2012 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Joseph
Date: 5/1/2012 3:33:00 PM
I live with this..beauty and sadness surrounding me ..the remnants of an 1890's farm. Perhaps you'd like my verse The Corn Crib Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Bob Quigley
Date: 5/2/2012 8:15:00 AM
We both live in areas steeped in yesterday. It is only for us to see it.
Date: 4/29/2012 6:37:00 PM
Very nice poem. i think it would be fun to remake the barn into a place of enchantment, don't you?
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Bob Quigley
Date: 4/30/2012 8:17:00 AM
Sounds like a good idea to me Peggy. Thanks for visiting my Barn.
Date: 4/21/2012 2:41:00 PM
I like the way you written Bob, nostalgic and meaningful poem. - Have a lovely weekend Bob. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Bob Quigley
Date: 4/21/2012 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise. Very kind of you to comment.
Date: 4/21/2012 11:16:00 AM
a sense of solitude permeates through your deep lines, bob... so refreshingly poignant..:) huggss!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 4/21/2012 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Nette

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