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The Odd Couple: The Beast Within

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Poetic Form: Verse
Inspired: 2024 March 27
Image: A Hallmark Moment by Corbert Gauthier

Corbert Gauthier | Artist
Age is a beast, that will only feast, until you're all bones, then it'll leave you alone ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/27/2024 4:54:00 PM
wow, when I read the title I wasn't expecting what you wrote. I liked what your wrote, though. I agree with you. Age is a beast, and an unwelcome one at that :-) Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 3/27/2024 9:03:00 PM
I agree, Sara, the title is a bit of a throw but it does hit home plate. Aloha, William

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