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The New Moon Prophecy

In orbit around a distant sphere An unknown moon will soon appear Lined with streaks of blue The warmth of friction,a blanket of gas Will cling to the surface, held tight by its mass All we thought we knew Will be consumed by what is known The Joyous truth, we're not alone Time will come to tell No diplomat will need be sent To its home bye the geological vent They'll have but a single cell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2012 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Joe. Love Carol
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Date: 12/7/2012 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on your great win...Sara
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Date: 12/5/2012 1:06:00 AM
Thank you, for commenting on my poem. I had to read this one at this very moment...Because Apocolyps Prophecy is on my TV right now! Wild! Very nice write. :o)
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Date: 12/4/2012 7:11:00 PM
Just the mere scientific tho't behind this tail-rhyme is strong...very well constructed entry. Scientific themes are greatly enjoyed here!! gwendolen
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Date: 12/4/2012 5:03:00 PM
Joe., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA
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Date: 12/4/2012 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations Joe xx
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Date: 12/4/2012 8:40:00 AM
Amazing piece of work, you have put a lot of thought into this one. I am not sure if all have grasped the intricacy of thought you have here. Well done!
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