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The Need To Let Go

The need to Let Go As children bring their broken toys With tears for us to mend, I took my broken dreams to God, Because He is my friend,..... But instead of leaving Him in peace to work alone, I hung around and tried to help With ideas of my own. At last I snatched them back, And cried.. "How could you be so slow?" "My child" He said,"What could I do?... You never did let go". Pray and Let go.

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Date: 1/22/2016 7:19:00 PM
Violet, awesome poem. A pleasure to read. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 2/9/2011 11:07:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Violet. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 4:03:00 AM
aww nice its true some times somethings are hard to let go of but God will always hel us to be strong, and some times we have no choice to let go regardless how much it hurts, thanks for your kidn comments God bless you from diane
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Date: 2/6/2011 10:38:00 PM
a well done poem,, enjoyed,, deep,..p.d.
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Date: 2/2/2011 1:03:00 PM
Lovely....thank you...
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