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The Nautic Art of Letting Go

By the side of the Sea She gives me glimpses of distance lost Of figures dancing upon mirrors beyond time Through thought I am writing calliographic lines that make the water glisten in orbits of reflection Two white swans answer swimming closer towards me At first glance they offer me their compassion One by one they lower their ivory necks One sips in fresh water The other curls up resting its head upon it`s featheredness From it`s crib the swan beholds me It sails like a small white boat behind the other This moment (shared) was meant that way

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Date: 3/15/2017 7:52:00 AM
- Kornelia, velkommen til Poetry Soup - En glede å se deg - Et fint lite dikt du deler her, hyggelig å lese din første post - Jeg har vært her i mange år og liker denne siden ... en fin måte å lære på ... dele og møte "venner" fra hele verden :) - klem fra // Anne-Lise :) ... (vi skal ikke skrive på Norsk her ... men, jeg gjør det på ditt første dikt :)))
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Kornelia Birch
Date: 3/15/2017 1:37:00 PM
Hei Anne-Lise :-) Hyggelig å lese tilbakemelding fra deg og "hei på deg" Det er en fin beskrivelse og jeg gleder meg til å treffe nye mennesker :-) :-) Beste hilsen Kornelia :-)
Date: 3/14/2017 1:54:00 AM
Hi Daren and Sunlite, Thank you both for the words of welcome. Much appreciate your comments greetings kornelia
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Date: 3/13/2017 3:11:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in your poem here. It reads as a poetic painting. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Date: 3/12/2017 11:55:00 AM
The other curls resting its head upon its featherdness. What a lovely picture. All of it was most enjoyable.
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