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The Moonlight Shadow

Once upon a gloomy night Stars and fireflies a bit apart Moonlight shadow so bright. Mysterious figures appeared before my eyes Oh I can't imagine I was staring with chills It was the first time I witnessed those apparitions What an experience to be treasured It changed my life, dreams, and mind Even today the vision still vivid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/14/2014 11:46:00 PM
You have me thinking...what could be that mysterious figure? It must be powerful enough to change you life, dreams and mind. You still have me thinking. Nice poem.
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 1/15/2014 1:09:00 AM
I saw The Christ and Mary at the clouds that surround the moon.
Date: 6/10/2013 6:50:00 AM
very nice
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 6/10/2013 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Cathy!
Date: 2/1/2013 5:34:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write this evening. Light & Love
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 2/1/2013 6:27:00 PM
Great Debbie! Thanks a lot!
Date: 1/31/2013 7:52:00 PM
Very nice poem i enjoyed it's exuberance!
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 1/31/2013 8:44:00 PM
Great April thanks!