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The Misnomer Loss

THE MISNOMER LOSS What is loss? Loose your keys? Your manager now has less employees? or is it cruelly cross, like a fatal disease? Did your child die while visible to your eye? Is justice for you nigh? Did a flood wipe it all away, too sudden to even ask why? We need a much better word for these, for losses like these are tragedies. Not a bank error, oh please! Rather it's the most painful horror, and not like missing keys. There is no word that describes the pain and suffering of a dead son. You can't save him; but you get proscribes, and when it is done - you are not the only one, among few knowing loss describes not demise. Nor other suffering that applies to loss, which lies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/12/2016 8:09:00 AM
seth itis a great poem even though it is sad.
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Date: 7/29/2016 8:53:00 PM
Great theme, great closer - and the wonderment is palatable ... CayCay
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Date: 7/21/2016 2:46:00 PM
- A moving and great poem, Seth - hugs // Sun :)
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Seth Diamond
Date: 7/21/2016 3:57:00 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
Date: 7/21/2016 1:16:00 AM
So true, Seth. No words are enough to describe certain kinds of pain...only tears remain. Good poem. And, thank you for introducing me to Poetry Soup. I am here too now.
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Seth Diamond
Date: 7/21/2016 3:57:00 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
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Seth Diamond
Date: 7/21/2016 11:01:00 AM
Hey Carol! You might want to check out the poetry contests. I just entered the footbridge poem contest. I would love to hear your opinion. As always, SMD
Date: 7/19/2016 7:59:00 PM
Very nice piece Seth..
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Seth Diamond
Date: 7/21/2016 3:57:00 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
Date: 7/19/2016 1:10:00 PM
Good work!
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Seth Diamond
Date: 7/21/2016 3:58:00 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.

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