The Mind

Born for awareness, the mind spins stagnant while thoughts remain hidden with scabbed over pain. The soul weeps in darkness. Janet L Vick Free Verse

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Ken Jordan

Date: 7/11/2015 3:26:00 PM

Janet, 7 stars shinning bright for this one. Came across your poem on Soups Home page, Enjoyed. always Ken

Skat A

Date: 7/11/2015 3:15:00 AM

janet :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Daver Austin

Date: 7/7/2015 1:36:00 PM

Yes, to escape the darkness into light. "Born for awareness" The line tells it all - love it. Congrats on the selection. daver

Judy Ball

Date: 1/27/2012 7:53:00 AM

The mind is a mystery. It has great power. It can make you your own prisoner or it can set you free. Just depends on which way you let it wander. Good job heere. God Bless, JB

Janet Vick
Date: 2/4/2012 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Judy for stopping by. Take care. Janet