The Mighty Mongoose

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This write is about the brave Andrew Bridgend former whip in the conservative government UK

Who obviously was compus mentus enough to hold that job.' Yet once he began questioning

Covid-iocy.. He was referred to as going full tin foil hat.?? Oh well..! They are so sheepish is my

Understanding now.)

This English legend, don't stand reall tall.' Yet he's the Peoples champion well thats my call.' He's out of the Corner they pushed him too; this hero Bridgnd fights For you.! Hes the English Mongoose lets be real.' the snakes Are slithering; right out the doors, they steal! ( parl lie mental ) their only mode.! Bloated on the twisted houses benefit Overload.' If you like Andrew want some change.? Just get Active don't only, lay blame.' Be part of the answer, make Some plans, join his colony it could get to a fifty span.? Support this warrior for the snakes are few.' Gather in your Numbers to build something new.' A land united agaist Any enemy threat? wether without or within? Why accept? Any vex.? Or false teaching.? Just set it aside.if its not Positive don't even deride.! just state good practice is what Is needed.! support the mongoose, untill these snakes are all just superceeded.!

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Valsa George

Date: 5/22/2024 5:07:00 AM

I agree with Sara... ! This is my experience too. I find it difficult to extricate your thoughts, dear Joe. Is it a political satire.... ? The mongoose and the snakes...! Do the mongoose stand for the savior who takes upon himself the task of destroying the snakes- the venomous ones! A very allegorical poem, I feel.

Joe Maverick
Date: 5/22/2024 11:02:00 AM

In this one I'd say its fairly Straight forward its contemporary' and focuses on Andrew Bridged who was a high Profile politican in the equivilent of 'the U S reoublican party' so he was sacked after he Took up the (post office agents) Cause and also he is fighting to get the truth on ( jab deaths and injuries ) 2020 up till now He himself has been injured after taking two injections.! The snakes are the politicans opposing him.!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/19/2024 5:31:00 PM

I find reading your poems a challenge but also find your mind and poetic style captivating. Will need to reread this before I can accurately comment...but wishing you a great evening, Sara

Joe Maverick
Date: 5/19/2024 10:49:00 PM

Thanks Sara..Your visit is much Appreciated..I write with the Thought flow I am recieving so The meanings dont ' always ' fit To a recognizable rhyme scheme I hope you can work them out more.? May God bless your ways!