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The Manchester Ship Canal - Part Two

Stilled again across the canals broadening Girth; Mesh cages of rock-filled Gabions Reinforcing patches of exposed and arid earth, Reflecting the glints that gleefully Twist and dance in the hot glare of the sun... Provoking images and stirring indefinable feelings That begin to irrevocably up and run; Pictures and voices crowding into my mind: Immersing me in the flooding moments To which i am briefly resigned. Now momentarily staid by the shimmering Instance In which i find myself inextricably caught, Perplexed by something rather intangible, Seeming almost to tease and laugh Whilst confounding upon my evasive and Fleeting thoughts; As glancing across at the opposite bank Where drawn up a line of densely packed trees.. I swore...I heard the reel of a high squealing Fiddle - Playing ever so briefly alongside a tricky little Breeze. For stood there I, wondering, On a grey painted swing-bridge: Of brightly painted Steamers, dirty Trampers And of double masted white canvassed Brigs. Oh! The everlasting glory of a New World order Redefined: Entrusted to those instructed in her Majesties Construction of sprawling Victorian sublimes! The men who heroically dug, picked, blasted and Strove: To securely fasten an Iron cast girdle around An ever diminishing blue globe. Dreaming of long ago, dutiful, Golden-Age days Rigorously pursued down, what are now, Weed strewn, abandoned byways. Faustian clothing and a Velveteens cap; The thick buckled leather gaiters held about By the strap. Many the word spoken in a soft southern brogue: All hail the glorious navigators - The navvies of old! Staunch and desperate men forced to resign Their native Gaelic shores And burden unto themselves with Mattocks, shovels and garishly painted-up whores. Under the high flaming beacons And over the obscure little brow - They carved out the new waterways To float the laden down prow. Yes! Men of the Emerald Isles I salute you and your kinsfolk From lands cast westwards afar: The magnificent "Paddies" from the verdant island - Of Erin-Go-Bragh!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/27/2016 10:29:00 AM
A wonderful and poignant write John. Brought back fond memories of when I was a police constable for The MSC Co. I too travelled the the length from Pomona to Eastham, as escort to the paymasters paying wages[before the BAC system]. Privileged to ride on The Daniel Adamson one time only. Thank you for the memory. God Bless D.
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Date: 9/4/2016 2:06:00 PM
Hi, Dave. Loved the comments you have left...They have quite simply made my day! I have to confess that until you mentioned the "Daniel Adamson" I was totally ignorant of its prior existence, painstaking restoration, and previous history. Thank you so much for bringing it to my attention! My very best wishes, Dave...And my warmest regards. :) john P.s I really do think now, under the circumstances, I need to work this steamship into the poem somehow.
Date: 11/29/2015 5:58:00 AM
It was the Irish! well, Erin-Go-Bragh indeed! Splendidly bedecked in glorious language and imagery this is a true tribute to that most famous of waterways, (to us at least). Thanks for the memories ny friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:50:00 AM
Thank you, Keith, for your lovely words. She is indeed worthy of honourable tribute...And also all those industrious men and woman who helped construct her. All hail the "paddy navvies"...From the glorious and green lands of Ireland! God bless you all! My very best regards, Keith! :) john
Date: 8/3/2015 5:46:00 PM
John as a boy in my home town of Stockport, these Irish labourers were everywhere in the fifties and sixties, of the post war building boom. I remember as a lad of no more than five or six sitting among them as they brewed their tea, and drank from giant manly mugs...they were friendly and patient but their accent difficult to understand....thank you again for the trigger...Peter
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:10:00 PM
You are spot on, Peter, regarding this race of men. Truly - They were a breed apart! And as for drinking tea: Again...You are right on the mark. Giant men who did giants work - fortified by countless gallons of hot, sweet tea! Cheers, Peter! :) john
Date: 7/1/2015 9:23:00 AM
John, you captivated me with your every line! You must be a well traveled person and a painter your descriptions wow me!~Olive ELoisa =)
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Date: 7/1/2015 5:14:00 PM
Once again...many thanks, Olive. I am very pleased you enjoyed the journey! You are always most welcome here. Best regards! :) john.
Date: 6/26/2015 9:42:00 AM
Wow..so rich with imagery...and someone with a fiddle! Had to google, the better to have an idea about their ways and appearance. Good one, JOhn!
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Date: 6/26/2015 2:25:00 PM
Thanks, Kim! I am so very glad you enjoyed the read. I have several poems on the go at the moment but they are proving to be very difficult! One of these poems is one I started 4 years ago!! Ah well...nobody ever said it had to be easy. Lol :) john.
Date: 6/23/2015 2:17:00 PM
You are welcome, John... Of mine, have a look at "At the Guyerzeller" (6/1/15)... No one has commented on it yet. I love my choice of name for the place - a real bank by the way.
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Date: 6/23/2015 3:54:00 PM
Okay Julia. I will have a good look through your poems at the very first opportunity...thats a promise! :-) John.
Date: 6/23/2015 9:34:00 AM
Part two continues your rich tale, much enjoyed. Excellent... Julia, :)
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Date: 6/23/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, Julia! You know of course you are always most welcome here. Your friend, john :-)
Date: 6/22/2015 1:42:00 PM
glorious way to close the series with such triumphant cry and a mirage of images, john... incredibly penned!.. huggs
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Date: 6/22/2015 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. It is good to see you visiting once more. You are always most welcome here. My very best regards! :) john
Date: 6/21/2015 12:14:00 PM
Ahhh, this is a brilliant ending to a poem that has warmed my heart in your salute to the the Irish. This entire poem is truly amazing. I always learn something from your talented words. Cheers, Connie
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Date: 6/21/2015 2:02:00 PM
Connie, i have said it before and i say it again: You always give me the very kindest of comments - I am most very grateful! My best regards to you Connie!! :) john.

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