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The Lull

I seek the lull-- To feel the tranquility of the night The hush of birds in calm respite The quiet compose of ancient trees The muted hymn on dulcet breeze On quiescent ridge of nocturne quest Find soothing balm on angel’s breath. Abeyant mind, free of hurt or qualm Opens to Christ when faith is strong Fearfully reached to touch a lightning rod But found instead, the hand of God.

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Daver Austin

Date: 8/10/2016 2:05:00 PM

The "Lull" I equate to my lines and spaces. It is the nospace where inner peace takes over and your blessed Christ reveals himself. You are so deep and beautiful. Love, daver

Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 8/11/2016 12:08:00 PM

I'm so very excited, you will LOVE this painting, Daver! :) It's wrapped, but still needs an outside covering. No longer had a frame, but still the best part was left behind. Le Chat Noir had been a cabaret frequented by Picasso. You'll see why.:))

Daver Austin

Date: 3/4/2016 11:11:00 AM

Hi, Mikki. We had, I hope, our last big snow storm. I'm ready for spring. Even the cats don't want to stay out long. A King Kong hug from Old Dave

Shane Cooper

Date: 3/2/2015 1:25:00 AM

My dear friend mikki your poem is beautiful the way you have described opening your mind to God and then closing with "But found instead, the hand of God."Astounding imagry. My wonderful poetess your work always touches my heart and mind. I am so glad to call you friend. love Shane xxx

Daver Austin

Date: 9/30/2014 2:42:00 PM

Here's one I missed, Mikki. It's like an unexpected gift. "The muted hymn on dulcet breeze." A regular hymn of praise the poem seems. You are so gifted. And it is rare to find one of your ability. Please write some more for us. A bear hug. daver

Farhana Akter

Date: 5/20/2014 8:54:00 PM

Like it

Joe Inka

Date: 12/6/2013 10:46:00 AM

Whenever I return to the Soup I always come to your poems for inspiration and a reminder of how words can transcend mere communication. I hope all is well

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2013 2:39:00 PM

Hi Michelle, i like it when I stop by Daver Austin's poem... That is mostly where I find your name.... I hope you do not mind when I stop by out of the blue... you are one of the many nice poets from the soup... sending you smiles... LINDA

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/31/2013 1:35:00 PM

How lucky I am to find one with no comment from me and shame on me for missing it. Just reading this gives me a feeling of peace and quiet but those last two lines are electrifying. Another beautiful write Michelle.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/9/2012 9:41:00 PM

Michelle Mac Donald ,, :-) a beautiful feeling... wish i could feel this lull... open to God, is what I long for... enjoyed...pd

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/18/2012 7:37:00 PM

Love it ,,,, the hand of GOD ;},,,, thank you for reading " My Son"

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/17/2012 12:37:00 PM

There is so much piece found in His hand Mikkie, what a gem to read tonight. Thank you for this reminder, enjoy the week ahead :) Regards Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2012 8:56:00 AM

and awesome beauty found in this one, sweetie!!

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/20/2012 2:40:00 AM

Beautiful imagery... great poem... Terry (& thanks for your kind comments)

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 8/9/2012 8:39:00 AM

..enjoyed..very well written ;) Hugs Laila

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/9/2012 2:37:00 AM

wow. very well written - JH

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/5/2012 4:47:00 PM

Beautiful and inspirational poem you have penned. Thank you for your wishes on our 40th anniversary. We had a wonderful weekend with family and friends. love phyl

Don Johnson

Date: 7/20/2012 2:38:00 AM

this is great, well diddly done right here, you are a well versed poet yes my dear...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/18/2012 3:16:00 PM

I believe this was one of my favs, dear Mikki...the flow is magical and melts my heart..muted hymn on dulcet breeze...your words are right from the heavens...gwendolen

Joseph May

Date: 7/16/2012 12:37:00 PM

powerful write Michelle....enjoyed...thanks for stopping by...luv...Joseph

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/16/2012 8:49:00 AM

A beautiful poem about His love.