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Love is a drug

"I've tasted love heroin and will never have that high again".. (paraphrased quote one from "Notting Hill") Love heroin is very potent stuff. It’s not like other drugs; it is for free. There is no ban on it, but it is tough to keep that high. It has no guarantee. Some folks I know can make it last and last. With just one hit, they’re good for sometimes years! For most, this drug’s effects can wear off fast, and then withdrawal brings them pain and tears. Love heroin can bring such fevered bliss, some addicts wreck their lives for it, or worse, would kill for it, so I can tell you this - expecting it to last is its great curse. I’ve heard of people my age finding it. I sure would like myself just one more hit! Dec. 8, 2016 for the Three Choices Plus Two Which Equals Five Or I Haven't Got a Clue Contest of Sara Kendrick

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/24/2016 3:57:00 PM

Hi Andrea! Good to hear from you. Not sure what "love heroin" is unless you're saying love (sex) is an addiction. For many it is. Also, not a sonnet lover but tbis one (to your credit as a writer) is clear and well written, with great rhymes. And thank you for your many hits to my site. Much appreciated. / M

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/22/2016 10:20:00 AM

Your choice from the five choices is an excellent one in my book..I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..Congrats on your placement..I like the accompaning picture as well..Sara

Michael Thompson

Date: 12/20/2016 6:52:00 AM

What a wonderful write Andrea. I think that you said it quite well. Wouldn't we all like one last hit.

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/19/2016 12:08:00 PM

Is that drug ingested directly into the heart or brain? Hmmm...Congratulations Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/19/2016 5:26:00 AM

Back to tell you congratulations on your placement Andrea! Superb! : )

Darren White

Date: 12/19/2016 1:59:00 AM

Notting Hill! There's so much small hidden treasure in that film :) Don't give up on that drug, it's worth it.

Richard D Seal

Date: 12/17/2016 7:27:00 PM

Only one more hit Petal, you have plenty of time for more than that lol. Congrats. Take care, Richard

Jannie Breedt

Date: 12/16/2016 10:32:00 AM

Well I overdosed and now I am sitting in rehab. Cleverly written sonnet

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2016 6:44:00 AM

So you understood this contest? I went cross eyed reading the title alone. Each line is most clever, Andrea - there is humor and there is truth, woven smoothly together. Yep - always one more last hit of that love stuff ... CayCay

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/11/2016 11:45:00 AM

Wonderfully stated. Gonna fav it.

Just James

Date: 12/11/2016 10:54:00 AM

hit me too!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/10/2016 10:26:00 AM

Love is all we need and I think we all would like that one more hit that one more high of the love bug. lol love phyl

Keith Baucum

Date: 12/10/2016 8:52:00 AM

We all need love

Francis J Grasso

Date: 12/10/2016 8:18:00 AM

Great write, Andrea.... I think everyone still thinks about one more hit!..... Maybe not - ...Fran

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 12/10/2016 5:15:00 AM

How very clever this one was Astounding x

Vera Duggan

Date: 12/10/2016 1:26:00 AM

Hi Andrea great write my friend, I don't need a love drug, in fact love is my drug especially after fifty four years, enjoyed it very much, take care.......Vera

Joseph May

Date: 12/9/2016 4:56:00 PM

A potent drug indeed...Good write Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 12/9/2016 11:15:00 AM

I'll takea hit of that stuff.love , daver

Paloma P

Date: 12/9/2016 8:27:00 AM

I'm also addicted to your poetry. :) Good luck, reads like a winner to me.

Chris Green

Date: 12/9/2016 7:29:00 AM

Love is definitely an addictive drug and your poem says expresses this so wonderfully. And it only takes once and you are hooked, I know, I am. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2016 4:40:00 AM

- A comparison of the best kind .... hooked on love ... a great drugs, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/9/2016 3:14:00 AM

surely, a quick fix, andie which loses its high soo fast... l love this one!..yes, the 'blood' image in my ''duplex" poem is symbolic... huggs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/9/2016 3:10:00 AM

Very true comparison, Andrea:) sure to do well in the contest:)

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/9/2016 1:32:00 AM

Worthy Andrea, so true. Here's to not being afraid to say how much we need it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/9/2016 1:28:00 AM

Love is indeed like a drug. Once you are hooked, you feel you can't live without it. You did a splended job relating that in your entry Andrea. It is like a roller coaster for me. Haha! 7 ; )