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The Lockless Door

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Ever had those moments when you were convinced-- no, make that Definite, that everything was going your way? Map in hand, destination in sight then only to be horrified that you suddenly didn't know how to read the map? That the compass doesn't work, that you misinterpreted the signs? So you are left with nothing. Stuck in a place between the now and the future-- Which is basically nowhere at all. Asking for directions is pointless, because the people you ask are as clueless as you are-- wandering in their own vicious circles; of rings getting tangled, untangled, clashing then finally collapsing into unlinkable chains A conundrum, really. Imagine this map as a perfect puzzle image, shattered into a million jagged pieces in midair-- and they lie suspended there, floating, painstakingly taking forever to fall--- to--- the......... ground You try to catch them, but are hesitant, because the pieces are so sharp, angry leaving you with bleeding cuts all over and yet if you fail to do so, and they hit the ground they shatter once again, as dust Impossible task, really. Crying does you no good, since tears mixed with that dust-- well, you are only left with mud So what's one left with? Instinct. Sheer gut. And you can only hope and pray that you don't make a wrong turn this time. Completely thrown off course, you follow what you think is right. Collect yourself, read the signs again and walk on. Might take you days, even years but at least you still tried, refusing to just stand still, waiting for the paths to show you the way. You pave those paths yourself, without trampling on ants and maybe one day you'd suddenly find yourself in front of that lockless door that was meant for you alone. It is clamped shut though, and will only open when it sees you. This is that door that actually leads to the place you've been searching for all along. It doesn't have any locks at all simply because You are the key. 07072011328p357

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2016 9:39:00 PM
oh wow, I found one!! Nikko did you do this for the contest? I love how you read with great intonation. VERY WELL DONE. This is how a poem needs to be recited, using emotion!!! Wonderful, dear friend. *you chose a great one to submit if it's for the contest. (YOU ARE THE KEY)remember that.
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Date: 10/12/2011 8:12:00 PM
What a satisfying end to this Nikko. I was starting to feel lost myself and you dear, handed me the key - so special!!!
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Date: 10/3/2011 6:33:00 PM
I agree with Chris.......for this poem of yours to have previously been a "non placed loser" is an example of the crazy inconsistencies on the soup
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Date: 10/3/2011 6:31:00 PM
excellent all through and a very clever ending..........jeez I gotta find time to ead more stuff ...... it seems I have missed a lot of the greatstuff you write.....well done and a well-deserved placing ...congratulations
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Date: 10/3/2011 11:56:00 AM
Don't know why this one grabbed me. Not sure what I read, but couldn't stop reading it, and reading it again. Nice work. I'll probably read it again. Love the descriptions.
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 1:34:00 AM
Nikko....you had me cautiously trying to catch the shards of glass right in mid air! Such a dynamic and detailed piece. You have a great way with words...a thriller here, really. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/3/2011 12:21:00 AM
Well done. A very interesting read, kept me mesmerized. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/2/2011 8:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!-----Lori
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:29:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on third place win with dynamic poetry sweetie.. is Riko or Rio or Rinko or ??? gone now..hehehehe..
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Date: 10/2/2011 2:04:00 PM
I was really happy to see the ants taken into consideration :) Totally dig the write, Nikko, on many many levels. Thanks for resuscitating it for my 'test! Beauty day to ya. Namaste~N
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Date: 9/23/2011 9:49:00 PM
I find a depth in this that takes me into a timeless feeling where being lost is almost pleasant. The last line is perfect.
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Date: 7/17/2011 6:28:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful...
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Date: 7/17/2011 5:20:00 PM
Very deep and poignant piece here. Lots of insight. Veery good advice. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:49:00 AM
so creative this wonderful piece of poetry you wrote, so real. enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 7/9/2011 11:59:00 PM
I am not even gonna ask if this is you Nikko...lol... i will be back soon... like in a couple of hours or so... to read and bother you of course.. and yes my vacation went super.... bye,..p.d
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Date: 7/9/2011 11:58:00 AM
Niknuk, I find your thirst for reality pleases you to share with many of us who ponder...and a sure fine job you have accomlished here, for I take notice, many Soupers are in accord with your philosophy; and here dear poet, you are the key ! Well done ! Have a blessed day, much love, james
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Date: 7/8/2011 5:44:00 PM
more soupmail!
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Date: 7/8/2011 1:46:00 PM
yeah!!! I think this is a good spin off of Go Figure! and a great wrap up ending! Light & Love
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Date: 7/8/2011 9:01:00 AM
wow, Nikko. VERY good stuff. It's deep but comprehensible!! You don't know how much I appreciate a deep read that is lucid for me. The message here is so true. I feel this way a lot more and more and more when I see the people around me floundering as well. Luv ya, andrea
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Date: 7/7/2011 4:59:00 PM
another fantastic creative write niknuk and a delightful impressive read luv... electric words..
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:40:00 PM
Perseverance,eh? Good show. LOve, daver
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:51:00 AM
This is amazing - love it : )
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:21:00 AM
What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us Niknak !. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:12:00 AM
this is how i feel durring election time when we lose. or more recently just after the casey anthony verdict. it has me very distrought. john
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