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The Living and the Dead

On a parched outback plain, there is a winding course. Red gums line the banks of a once water source. But sand is creeping quickly, through drought and failing rain, so the flora must adapt, on a parched outback plain. The black box struggles on; desert pea seed needs rain. Quandong wants the wattle to fight through the dry again, but when it gets too parched, life finds the boiling sun, can be a bridge too far, so many do succumb. The living and the dead keep standing side by side. One is dressed in green; one gray with life denied. One shade for a traveler; one hollowed out instead; and accompany one another - The living and the dead. On the floodplain of an anabranch where the soil is dry and dust. The salt bush remains prolific where beneath them is a crust. Parts of nitre bush are dying, but the rest keeps struggling on. There’s skeletons of invadors; sun seered now dead and gone. Skeletons line the shrinking water of carp that are deceased, and carcasses of kangaroos from starvation has increased. A feast for roaming goannas, who scavange on the dead, beside ravens and the eagles, until the living are well fed. The living leave the dead in their struggle to survive as they search for greener pasture once the rain does finally arrive. The cycle starts it’s journey that’s been hanging by a thread, and new life that’s in the ouback to keep living needs the dead.

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Date: 3/31/2022 2:29:00 PM
Been out there a few times lol)) You'll feel a Slight breeze on sweat oiled skin. Dip your Hat in the trough, a cascade runs of instant Cool, 30 seconds later the heat is closing in Hear the crows harsh caarking see the welling Air Just swim, blue hints tint the silver roofs that bang! Of their expanding tin) Dust clouds stretch out A fencline long a ute is drawing near, old bill Will soon be pulling in check shirt with bushfire Braces time to roll up a fag exhale the drag Tea & bickies dear
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Date: 11/2/2021 11:19:00 AM
The difference between life and death in a drought season. So true and so well described in this poem Lindsay. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 11:11:00 PM
Hello Phyllis ... so true Phyllis. I appreciate your comment. Had a wild wind storm; power out for three days, plus four grand kids that needed to be entertained - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 10/30/2021 12:30:00 PM
This is poetry 'extraordinaire' powerful images, awesome rhyming, truthful facts about the cycle of life - this deserved POTW! Hugs and blessings Lindsay, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 11:01:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... I guess that South Africa is afflicted by severe drought also at times. How anything can survive amazes me - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 10/24/2021 8:20:00 PM
Scarier than Halloween by a longshot, Lindsay. 'Vita longa, ars brevis.' (I reversed the order of the expression to make it: 'Life is long; art is short.'). Thanks, gw
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 10:58:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... thank you Gershon. Most outback flora and fauna have perfected the art of survival in the outback during drought - Lindsay
Date: 10/24/2021 4:15:00 PM
A marvellous write Lindsay, so true to life… Belle
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 10:55:00 PM
Hello Belle ... Pleased you enjoyed this poem Belle, and if you ever lucky enough to visit the outback you would understand it even more - thank you Belle - Lindsay
Date: 10/23/2021 4:51:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one, Laurie: It took me back to the outback and all so well described I felt I was really there. Best, SuZ
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 10:52:00 PM
Hello Suzanne ... if you have been in the outback then I feel this poem is so vivid of what you see, but it can change very quickly indeed with a drop of rain - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
Date: 10/23/2021 11:33:00 AM
Excellent as always Lindsay. So true to life. Life is after all a circle. Great job here with super imagery. God Bless, JB
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 10:48:00 PM
Hello Judy ... thank you Judy. This is most certainly true to life in the outback but after a little rain it quickly changes to miles of wildflowers - Lindsay
Date: 10/23/2021 9:52:00 AM
This is a little different from your usual humorous kind of poetry. A powerful and profound one, Lindsay. It's nice seeing all your styles that you write in.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 10:45:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... yes, it is very different, but I do enjoy writing poems based on fauna and the environment - I appreciate your comments Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 10/21/2021 2:47:00 PM
Hard hitting and powerful Lindsay. This is going straight to favs. Emilia : )
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 10:40:00 PM
Hello Emilia ... thank you. I appreciate your fine comment Emilia - Lindsay
Date: 10/21/2021 2:09:00 PM
Wow! Magnificent poetry! If you don't already have that book of "Complete Poet Works, please get to it. You are no ordinary writer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 10:38:00 PM
Hello Joe ... your comment has me feeling humble Joe, and no, I don't have a book published - thank you Joe - Lindsay
Date: 10/20/2021 9:33:00 AM
Well thought and said! Enjoyed!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/2/2021 10:35:00 PM
Hello Rico ... the outback can be very unforgiving. Thanks once again Rico - Lindsay

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