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the light of the sun behind the sky of grey clouds veil over the dead Haiku Contest II 12 September 2017

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Date: 10/8/2017 3:37:00 PM
I do also like this haiku. I can see the scenes as I read. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/13/2017 2:18:00 AM
very descriptive Russell I love that final line:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2017 5:30:00 PM
Yes, we are all "becoming" dead. That is how I see that last line. A very interesting KU, my friend.
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Date: 9/12/2017 6:50:00 AM
Lovely Haiku Russell--good luck for the contest!
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