The Leaning Poem of Pisa

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Originally published: 30th May 2020

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I wish to share a secret about a landmark I've just viewed - the tower of pisa doesn't lean it's the world that's sadly skewed.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/23/2022 11:56:00 PM

Delightful brevity ~ congrats on your top win, Gary

Gary Radice
Date: 2/24/2022 12:01:00 AM

Thanks Line! :) I actually find writing a shorter poem harder than writing a longer one - possibly as I have to cram the idea(s) in quicker. Who knows? :) Cheers - Gary

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/23/2022 4:54:00 PM

So true. Actually it is straight it is just leaning from the foundation. Our world IS skewed, especially right now. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Gary Radice
Date: 5/17/2022 11:00:00 PM

I've changed a line to place emphasis on the tower 'not leaning" now rather than it "not being straight' Cheers - Gary

Gary Radice
Date: 2/24/2022 12:04:00 AM

Hi Connie - you are ro right - it IS actually straight. I'm now thinking as I write this if there is any word that rhymes with perpendicular :) Thanks for the congratulations and for making me think further too :) Cheers - Gary

Greg Gaul

Date: 5/29/2021 9:55:00 AM

Gary, Ogden would straighten up and be so proud of you.

Gary Radice
Date: 5/29/2021 12:04:00 PM

Great praise indeed. Thanks as always Greg. Cheers - Gary

David Holmes

Date: 5/27/2021 2:52:00 PM

Gary - Congratulations - very well done, put a smile on my face when I got to the last line! David

Gary Radice
Date: 5/28/2021 12:17:00 AM

David, thank you. It's nice to see a poem that's a year old coming back from the void and doing well in a contest. :) I appreciate your visit, read and comments. Cheers - Gary

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/27/2021 10:16:00 AM

In more ways than one my friend! Delightfully witty! Congrats and high fives! And I hope I may say "cheers" to you!

Gary Radice
Date: 5/27/2021 12:25:00 PM

Cheers Sam :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/24/2021 10:37:00 AM

Fine observation Gary, weather in jest or not, there is a lot of truth behind this poem, congratulations on your placement, cheers David

Gary Radice
Date: 5/24/2021 11:02:00 AM

David, thanks for the visit and your insightful comments. Yes, it may come across as a jest but it's not meant to be. I must be getting old as certain world events leave me scratching my head and going to bed each night quite concerned about them. Cheers - Gary