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The Last Words

We have come this far, In this forever, here we are, a speck of sand, a blink vulnerable as we think we are not a never, nor are we a forever. Time will claim the choice, silence the loudest voice, All the whispers ever heard will go mute in deathly word. Vision seeds go unplanted, timbers fall warped and slanted. Moments shiver and sieze with the dying of the breeze. We find our home inside the womb of the natures bride waiting to be reborn left behind lovers mourn. Finality is a fragile thought some fear, some sought, and it is my turn for goodbye. Time comes and we all die. For contest: my muse, mortal Date: 6/21/18

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/18/2019 9:02:00 AM

Here's another fav for me. You have found such meaning in few words and rhyme. Wonderfully done again Cas.

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/23/2018 3:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Well done! An exceptional poem.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/21/2018 5:37:00 PM

Beautifully composed Casarah! "Finality is a fragile thought some fear, some sought," I can identify completely with these lines! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/21/2018 3:04:00 AM

This was one of the first poems I read, Casarah, and I knew it would place highly and stay there ... you have an unusual style and took a bit different tack, one I just adore, and your phrasing and imagery is exquisite, joined with a fresh and articulate word economy that I so admire! (You also see the world and life much as I do). This is a superb poem - you have a singular talent! Congratulations on your THIRD PLACE in the 'My Muse, Mortal' Poetry Contest - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/21/2018 1:35:00 AM

congratulations on win-like the womb of nature's bride line.

Louis Spence

Date: 7/13/2018 1:12:00 PM

You kindly commented on my poem Mister Blues, saying it read like a song. It is just that and will be on YouTube shortly. Many of my poems are songs I have recorded. I like some of your work very much. Thanks for taking the time out to comment. Louis Spence

Tim Parry

Date: 7/11/2018 2:39:00 AM

A very good write that poses the age old question about our own mortality had me absolutely spell bound Tim

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/24/2018 12:53:00 AM

Indeed, life embraces death, as it must. You can't love the pizza and hate the crust. Viv x

Casarah Nance
Date: 6/24/2018 2:48:00 PM

mmm pizza....

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/23/2018 10:34:00 AM

You my great friend have awed me with this definitely top class poetry! This the kind of gem one stands back in profound appreciation and astonishment when found! Definitely should be published! A fav.. a truly great fav..

Casarah Nance
Date: 6/24/2018 2:48:00 PM

Thank you I appreciate that!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/23/2018 2:06:00 AM

Ahhhh, finally, I melt in the heat of your warm heated words, and so glad you are back!!!!!!! Hugs!!!!!

Casarah Nance
Date: 6/24/2018 2:48:00 PM

hugs!!

Lyric Man

Date: 6/22/2018 7:52:00 AM

Cas, let me say this is a first place contest kind of write. I'm spellbound by its simple beauty and depth. This kind of write can only come from a soul that thinks and feels and is continually alive in thoughtful contemplation. I marvel at your skill and sit at your feet to hear more!

Casarah Nance
Date: 6/24/2018 2:47:00 PM

Thank you for you encouraging comment!