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The Last Master of War

Not a true Choka...but uses a 5,7,7,5,7,7 format ------------------------------------------------- Chill, steaming vapour; Silence over pale water; Faded, thin wisps of ribboned Pink Above the east gate; I dip oars...and silence Breaks. Trace of flame in lilac sky. Raise, lean, dip and pull; Sculling forward little Twirls Swirl away from dripping Blades; Uplifted soul -- soaring! Remembering how, when young... Each new day would bring New hope. Extends the shoreline -- Sweeping inwards at the Point; Green bulrushes in the bay; A bittern booming:- Rising up like slow thunder Drifting out of jade mountains. My busied childhood, Hidden pate not yet shaven; Shrimping with a fine mesh Net; Loud, boyish laughter; Brimming jars crammed with Sunbeams -- The golden, darting minnows. Horizon widens, Shadow retreats from low Hills; Gathering orb comforts me; Selfsame warm comfort When held by sleepy women In cold grey of early dawn. The vaguest murmur, Faint as drowsy breathe, Of the soundings of dim chimes... A call to prayer? Hands hard-clenched on the Staid oars; Restrained by yesteryear.

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Date: 7/2/2020 10:22:00 PM
Wow John your words are seductive! Lol but I never doubted you could seduce with words! Haha I know for a fact!;)
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John Fleming
Date: 8/26/2020 8:26:00 AM
Why thank you, Poetess...your words of encouragement are a constant pleasure to me. :) john
Date: 6/27/2020 6:50:00 PM
John, this is a real beauty of images as penned with exactitude capturing it clearing and tenderly. 5 star! a fav
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Date: 8/30/2020 3:17:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne! And my apologies for the long delay in replying...so very, very busy of late. A great pleasure to make your acquaintance - cheers! :) john
Date: 6/27/2020 6:10:00 PM
I feel like I can smell the salt water as I read this one.
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