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The Lady of the House

It’s siesta, yet one can hear from the second floor of the house the animated sharing of juicy news some visitors have brought to the gracious host, the lovely widow of a wealthy sugar planter. The sound of laughter is carried over the charming veranda bordered by lacy cast-iron grillwork, with its delicate oak leaf and acorn design and colorful, overhanging ornamental plants and flowers. Three Creole society matrons in their typical 1840s long dress fashion despite the sultry heat are being served their tea and fanned by the owner’s black slaves. They are talking about the strange happenings at what used to be Dr. Louis and Mdme. Delphine Lalaurie’s grand house at 1140 Royal Street, a few houses away from the where they are having an afternoon gossip. Apparently, the last tenant abandoned the Lalaurie house not only because of some ghost sightings and agonized sounds that were heard from within. His furniture business inventory was also being mysteriously destroyed at night. The lady of the house remembers how Mdme. Delphine Lalaurie used to be a respected member of New Orleans society. After the fire in 1834 and the subsequent discovery by firemen of seven emaciated slaves at the attic with obvious traces of abuse and torture, the couple and their four grown-up children had to flee in the middle of the night, or be lynched by the angry townsfolk. Were all the stories true? Six years later, no human bones were discovered at the backyard, nor actual records or reports thereof, negating further accusations of slave murders, including that of a young girl who allegedly fell from the rooftop trying to escape her lady’s wrath. If Mdme. Lalaurie was the inhuman monster the press accused her of that time, then all of her contemporaries were also guilty, including all plantation owners, for the practice of slavery was fundamentally immoral and depraved. The lady of the house tells herself it is best to keep silent and let one person take all the condemnation. This removes the attention of the press and the restless community away from her social circle and her own guilt. privileged mindset and undue exploitation - cancer cell takes root Inspired by A House in New Orleans Contest 27 January 2016 Note: The Lady of the House is a fictitious character, but relies heavily on historical background from: 1. Mad Madam Lalaurie: New Orlean’s Famous Murderess Revealed by Victoria Costner Love and Lorelei Shannon 2. Old New Orleans, a History of Vieux Carre, Its Ancient and Historical Buildings by Stanley Clisby Arthur 3. Mdme. Delphine Lalaurie, Wikipedia

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Date: 12/17/2017 1:58:00 PM
Great write, KP Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/5/2016 11:21:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:56:00 PM
Oh Kim, I do like this one, I like a good juicy murder story fictitious or not, very interesting story, hope you are well, take care.........Vera
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:57:00 AM
A wonder and a bliss, your lines have given my heart a kiss and I am glad on your page, I did not suffer a miss. An outright 7 dear colleague
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Date: 2/7/2016 5:03:00 PM
Hello Kim ... a great story that is quite intriguing with a moral that is worth heeding - well done Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:13:00 AM
i had to come back to your page and check out the haibun, i have written a few in my life but it's not something you see too often! Very nicely written, enjoyed the read :)
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:45:00 AM
Hi Kim. This is a very well thought out and researched piece. And I love the way you crafted this story. You are right about one taking all the condemnation while others hide behind their own guilt. This was a sad state of affairs in our history and still lives on in the minds of many. And just like cancer, we can only pray for a cure. This is a (7) and will go into my favorites so that I may read and think about this more. Thanks for sharing my friend... Robert.
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:37:00 AM
Never mind the contest, Kim, an absorbing write that really drew me in. Love it. Viv x
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:35:00 AM
I could imagine the scenery with ease. The way of writing is very effective. Beautiful!
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Date: 1/30/2016 4:40:00 PM
Great piece, thanks for sharing.........A.M.
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Date: 1/29/2016 10:42:00 AM
Hi Kim...if I'm not mistaken this is the third Haibun of yours which I'm reading, and all have been of a high standard. You relate with ease of expression helped by imagery and a mixture of history and imagination. Also, you are careful and diplomatic when it comes to putting blame on others...not guilty till proven so! Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/29/2016 8:47:00 AM
Impressive piece! I'm sure this would have been high on the winners list. 7 all the way!
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Date: 1/28/2016 10:17:00 PM
Love this type of writing! Now am curious to know more! Great poem Kim!
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:12:00 PM
Slavery was an ugly darkness that infected people with its cancer. Wealth was to be made at others great expense and yes even death. Sad but a great and destructive civil war ended that and our nation eventually found its path in the world. Great work my friend. A7
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:06:00 PM
Interesting work about a period of time in our country as well as other countries that was no one people want to remember but there is still slavery today sad to say..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:41:00 AM
This is a great story with such an important message. You are so insightful. It matters not that you meet or do not meet a deadline here. For you have affected me and changed (even if for a moment or slightly) my direction and thoughts. How can I or anyone ever pay you back for that?
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:58:00 AM
well penned Kim, excellent write...
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:05:00 AM
- Kim, you impress me with this gorgeous story - ...... woooow !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:57:00 AM
I have to admit, I read this yesterday and when I was finished I just couldn't think of anything to say.It is a well researched piece and tastefully done, but the subject matter disturbed me, I rarely find myself at a loss for words so I read it again tonight. It is a splendid write. very emotional to say the least.
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:47:00 AM
When I was young, raised in the south. I was brought up in a Christian home by parents who sheltered their children from the ugliness of discrimination and the "sexual revolution". People were just people. I did not learn the difference until schools were segregated and the ugliness reared it's head. "Life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness. That's how the constitution reads.
Date: 1/27/2016 8:25:00 PM
It's very cool how you inserted history into this by having them discussing this Mdme!! I think I heard of a horrid woman like that in new Orleans. maybe this very one you describe. you are doing so well with poetry these days. You are unstoppable.
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/28/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Andie. She's one and the same... Yes, though she was guilty of cruelty to the slaves, I think she too was a victim of yellow press, for stories about her always begun with "We understand..." certainly not the words of sound reporting supported by cold facts. Thanks again for your encouragement, Andie. hugs!
Date: 1/27/2016 4:32:00 PM
oh Kim such a shame you missed the contest dealine - it happens to us all :-( the research you have done brings this tale to life - I do hope Lin reads it:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:54:00 AM
powerful display of socio- cultural images, kim... you amaze with historical references and a clear message on racism... take a bow!..huggs
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Date: 1/27/2016 7:17:00 AM
A captivating story depicting the era of slavery and human behavior! Excellently written, dear Kim!
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/27/2016 7:27:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind comment, sire. :-)

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