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The Lady Down the Lane

in the first crevice of light as dawn flushed its skies her frail fingers struggled to pluck weeds from spring buds that laid like a colorful quilt on her once rolling green lawn you could hear the creaks on wood as she rocked on the weathered porch watching for the children to walk by as the school days finally ended she'd speak to anyone that listened her story was hapless but known by all her loneliness was seen in the depth of her hazel eyes no one ever turned down the jaunty invite inside her antiquated home where her fingers danced nimbly across the piano as she sang them songs she hid her loneliness and darkness of life reserved her tears behind closed blinds at night when the blinds remained unopened the children knew and they flooded the funeral homes to say their goodbyes march 20, 2020

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Date: 4/25/2020 12:05:00 PM
Plaintive, and austere yet so validating a description! Loved this alot. It reminded me of a neighbor I once knew and loved. Thank you for the beautiful read
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/25/2020 6:32:00 PM
what a kind thing to say... thank you!
Date: 4/8/2020 9:57:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute to this soul. Well done.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:38:00 PM
Thank you so much ML... hugs
Date: 3/31/2020 7:09:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in this contest my friend. Your poem was absolutely beautiful and I am not alone in thinking so, look at all of the people who have stopped by to read it. I am so proud of you
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris....your comment brought a smile... hugs
Date: 3/31/2020 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement. Sandra, beautiful poem very emotional and touching. I can feel my heartstrings fluttering when I read this. Very moving.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:37:00 PM
Thank you so much JC for such a kind comment... hugs
Date: 3/29/2020 10:01:00 PM
I am so happy to see this a top winner Sandra. People like her make a difference in this world. A beautiful difference. Congratulations! xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:36:00 PM
Thank you so much my sweet friend... hugs and blessings! XoXo
Date: 3/29/2020 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest, this is so moving and heartfelt-
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Michelle, she was a sweet person, and deserving of a nice tribute! hugs
Date: 3/29/2020 4:41:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your awesome win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:35:00 PM
Thank you Eve... hugs
Date: 3/29/2020 4:14:00 PM
So lovely and touching, Sandra! Congratulations on your merited podium finish! Regards // paul
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Paul... hugs
Date: 3/29/2020 4:02:00 PM
A great win. A wonderful story..........
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:34:00 PM
Thank you Paula... hugs
Date: 3/29/2020 2:57:00 PM
You totally brought me into her world, Sandra. I have read many of your poems but this is one of my favourites.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/9/2020 10:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Wendy... hugs
Date: 3/24/2020 8:27:00 AM
I think the second read was even more impactful. You expressed this so well.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Rick... hugs and blessings...
Date: 3/23/2020 6:09:00 AM
Great imagery, I can see her rocking. Well done.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:30:00 AM
thank you so much ML :)
Date: 3/22/2020 8:23:00 AM
I think this is my favorite poem not only of today but of all time. I have read over two hundred poems this week and this one is the one I shall remember Sandra. Thank God you wrote it.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:30:00 AM
wow... thank you so much Caren... I think we all know of someone like her... hugs and blessings :)
Date: 3/22/2020 1:43:00 AM
Wow, what an amazing poem this is, brings home to one 'life' as it is to someone somewhere..love the Hazel eyes reminds me of my mum.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:29:00 AM
thank you so much Harry... glad I could make you think of your mom... hugs and blessings
Date: 3/22/2020 12:27:00 AM
Sandra, Well that is the way of it, cruel or kind. The watered and sheltered flower grows. The others survive or wilt in the mystery that a only merciful world knows. -Richard
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:28:00 AM
thank you Richard... she was a beautiful soul... hugs and blessings
Date: 3/22/2020 12:27:00 AM
What a nice pleasant verse, if for the contest it should do very well. Enjoyed reading, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:27:00 AM
thank you so much Eve... hugs and blessings
Date: 3/21/2020 10:55:00 PM
Can just picture this fine lady. Perfectly portrayed! :) gw
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:27:00 AM
thank you so much Gershon... hugs
Date: 3/21/2020 7:13:00 PM
A worthwhile lady to know. The young and the old.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:27:00 AM
thank you Kim... she was a sweetheart... hugs
Date: 3/21/2020 1:44:00 PM
Touching , moving, aching but beautiful poetry dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/24/2020 8:26:00 AM
thank you so much Demetrios :)
Date: 3/21/2020 5:53:00 AM
This is so moving Sandra. To give joy and be beloved by so many has its own reward. Beautiful, tho sad ending my friend, sad for the ones who will miss her! xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/21/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Connie... the little ones adored her... she was a sweetheart! hugs X0X0
Date: 3/20/2020 11:26:00 PM
A sad one eloquently expressed Sandra. Hugs Rick. Thanks for your visit. ;0)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/21/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Rick... hugs
Date: 3/20/2020 9:33:00 PM
oh so sad and so poignantly written, Sandy. I love the way you phrase things even in story telling poetry.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/21/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea... hugs
Date: 3/20/2020 3:32:00 PM
A very touching story Sandra, we take so much for granted and so many suffer in silence but always manage to put on a smile for others. A lovely tribute to her but now she is at peace. Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/20/2020 3:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom... she's been gone as long as my mother almost... hard to believe, but she still crosses my mind... hugs :)
Date: 3/20/2020 2:02:00 PM
Sadly beautiful my friend. What a heart touching piece. I am actually tearing up right now just thinking about this and reading your replies to others below about this woman who all of the children seemed to love. Wow, so beautiful as is the heat this poem came from.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/20/2020 2:58:00 PM
thank you Chris... shame she never had any children of her own, she was good with the kids and they all loved to hear her play the piano and sing to them...I was blessed to live next to her … she was always outside as if on a schedule... flowers first, then hanging laundry, then sitting on her rocker... a few times she fell asleep making lunch and her smoke alarms would go off but I would knock and wake her and all would be good...I don't remember who found her, but glad it wasn't me...hugs and blessings
Date: 3/20/2020 1:51:00 PM
A sweet Lady was she...to conclude those graceful years as she did was a blessings...Nice write
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/20/2020 2:54:00 PM
she was a sweetheart and the kids all loved her... they were sad when she passed and I wasn't going to take them to the funeral but they said they were going to her funeral as were all the neighborhood children so I went with them...it was only a block walk from the house... it was amazing to see the turnout, I think there may have been 3 older people that went to school or worked with her present but the rest were mostly young kids as little as 3... hugs
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