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The Killer Cold

Fall dressed for passion dances with a cold lover... then winter kills her.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/18/2011 6:19:00 PM

Never knew what a haiku was but am getting the idea. You use it to great advantage with so few words and this is outstanding but then so are the others.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2010 8:02:00 AM

very powerful, and deep enjoyed your haiku. I like the tittle its like the killer of all things.,..have anice one,..p.d.

Rauwolfia Ra

Date: 5/24/2010 11:09:00 PM

Well written, a pitty winter had to kill her, or else this haiku might have been longer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2010 4:12:00 PM

OOOH, so COLD(I just hate that damn winter)

Mitch White

Date: 5/16/2010 6:23:00 AM

That Old man winter lol ty for the kind comments- you nailed it- the evil will be swallowed not unlike a bite of mashed potatoes

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/16/2010 3:44:00 AM

Outstanding use of personification, Timothy. Truly a brilliant haiku! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2010 3:43:00 AM

Transition of the seasons nicely expressed