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I sat in languid candle light as water poured outside and lightning flashed, defied the introverted mood of night. From flash to flash my roaming mind the realms of love traversed; my thoughts like bubbles burst pinched in the bud, left undefined. Yet effervescence would not cease I knew that up till dawn the need for you would spawn – A constant tease without release. Each image brought a burning ache. The yearning would not sleep but thundered in the deep. My body trembled in its wake. Remembered touches of your hand tormenting naked skin the veil between us thin your pilgrim lips on sacred land. In endless night, your presence near yet never truly there. My heart you did not spare. Without your love, my life so drear. ----------------------------------------------------------------- A Callman Collaboration (Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian) ©January 2022

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Date: 8/24/2022 8:30:00 PM
Beautiful collaboration, difficult to distinguish the poets' output separately, just as sugar when dissolved in water. Loved this poem of love and longing, especially the fourth stanza......"Each image brought a burning ache. The yearning would not sleep but thundered in the deep. My body trembled in its wake. "
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2022 10:48:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Eileen and I have very similar ways of expressing ourselves, and it's always a pleasure collaborating with her. Best regards // paul
Date: 4/4/2022 7:44:00 AM
Brilliant collaboration by two amazing poets, Paul:)
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Date: 5/7/2022 2:05:00 AM
Thank you for the complimentary remarks, Jo...they are most welcome. Have a lovely weekend, my friend // paul
Date: 4/3/2022 6:46:00 AM
Paul...I'm so late to comment, but so glad that you write with me now and again. :) Always a pleasure writing with you, dear.
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Date: 5/7/2022 1:38:00 AM
Thank you dear Eileen; I too am guilty of being late in replying! Age is definitely taking its toll :) I'm not as good as I used to be in multitasking. It is always a pleasure to collaborate with. We need to give life to a new cowritten poem :) Hugs // paul
Date: 3/8/2022 7:21:00 AM
the two of you write so beautifully together, my friend
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Date: 5/7/2022 1:39:00 AM
Thank you Jack. I hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul
Date: 2/20/2022 3:22:00 AM
A poem of sadness and longing ! The absence of the person loved leaves the heart aching without end and 'the yearning thundering in the deep' . Great collaboration Paul and Eileen.... Regards!
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Date: 2/5/2022 4:28:00 PM
Hello Paul ... a really nice poem indeed. Enjoyed the flow. It's a great collaboration Paul - stay safe Paul - Lindsay
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Date: 2/5/2022 10:45:00 AM
Very nicely done... Congrats to both of you.
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Date: 2/2/2022 7:53:00 AM
A beautiful collaboration Paul…Delice
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Date: 2/17/2022 2:21:00 PM
Glad you liked it, Delice...thank you // paul
Date: 2/2/2022 12:25:00 AM
Such great poetry! You always had a way with words!:)
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Date: 2/17/2022 2:20:00 PM
Thank you for paying a second visit, Brenda :) Hope all is well on your side of the fence :) Regards // paul
Date: 2/1/2022 4:55:00 AM
A wonderful piece and I enjoyed how the enclosed couplets added to the atmosphere- like lingering thoughts. Congratulatiions. to you and Eileen. SuZ
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Date: 1/31/2022 6:45:00 PM
What a beautiful collaboration..So glad I found this gem.
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Date: 1/31/2022 12:34:00 PM
Such lovely poetic touches Paul, nice rhyme and flow too with good expression. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 8/27/2022 7:17:00 AM
Many thanks, Gordon, especially for pointing out our rhyme and flow. Best regards and blessings // paul
Date: 1/28/2022 6:04:00 PM
Wow, one amazing Collab, "Night" a time to think, a time to elaborate in poetry. This truly a magic poetic piece. Soon to visit Eileen.
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Date: 8/27/2022 7:15:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments, Harry. Excuse the late reply; too many pr8iorities in life! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 1/27/2022 4:50:00 AM
Oh the rhyme and rhythm are just great. Sad as the poem maybe, what a pleasure to read.
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Date: 8/27/2022 6:44:00 AM
Thank you from both Eileen and myself, Scott. Apart from subject matter, much attention is given to both rhythm and rhyme, something which is very close to our heart. Best regards, my friend. // paul
Date: 1/26/2022 8:39:00 PM
Sad, but brilliant, Paul and Eileen. Great job putting this together and collaborating. Regards to both. Charlie
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Date: 8/27/2022 7:08:00 AM
I am pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration, Charles. I hope you are keeping well. Best regards // paul
Date: 1/26/2022 4:24:00 AM
That longing has a profound presence in this poignant collaboration Paul and Eileen. Sometimes it is difficult holding the sadness at bay. Beautifully composed. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/7/2022 1:59:00 AM
Pls excuse my late reply to your lovely visit, Connie; your feedback is truly appreciated. Warm regards & blessings, my friend // paul
Date: 1/26/2022 12:12:00 AM
The title intrigued me but the piece amazed me!;)
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Date: 1/31/2022 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brenda...love your reaction!! :) Best regards // paul
Date: 1/25/2022 10:46:00 AM
Hello Paul Callus, as i read this poem I felt the sadness as I read. Regard Darlene
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Date: 1/31/2022 8:52:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed this poem, Darlene. Longing is usually accompanied by sadness. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 1/25/2022 7:38:00 AM
I saw this wonderful collaboration yesterday Paul, you and Eileen work well together. Quite a sad verse tinged with sadness. Hope you're keeping well Paul. Tom
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Date: 1/25/2022 10:31:00 AM
Thank you for making a second visit to this collaboration, Tom. Yes, this happens to be one of our sad ones; perhaps reflecting how we've all been feeling these past 2 years due to the pandemic. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 1/25/2022 6:10:00 AM
The mood of night sings song of love. Enjoyed the romantic voice of your poem in splendid metaphors. Kudos to you Paul and Eileen for this wonderful collaboration.
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Date: 1/25/2022 6:33:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely feedback, Vijay, and I am sure Eileen would echo my same thoughts. Regards // paul

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