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The Inevitable

THE INEVITABLE man versus nature his broken lines into corners that fated first step and ultimate collision with nature herself Dave Austin

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/15/2017 9:39:00 AM

thought-provoking write, Daver - I hope you're feeling much, much better

Daver Austin
Date: 1/15/2017 10:25:00 AM

Thanks, Jack. I'm doing much better now. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2016 4:31:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Man doesn't have to face what man once faced but nature is the strong of the two when it comes to powerful forces..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2016 9:35:00 PM

thanks for the birthday wish, my friend. Luv, Andrea

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 8/31/2016 8:22:00 PM

Too true - well said

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2016 12:01:00 PM

You send out a great message Daver - I agree with Connie that nature will win:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/26/2016 3:40:00 AM

Mother Nature will always win out daver. A great little senryu. ; )

Paul Callus

Date: 8/25/2016 7:17:00 AM

Cutting corners to reach an aim does not mean that the results are going to be good! Nature is much more powerful than we can ever imagine! ~ Regards // paul

Daver Austin
Date: 8/25/2016 10:48:00 AM

Yes, and there are no corners in nature. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2016 3:46:00 PM

The collision part of this poem had great IMPACT, Daver!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/21/2016 1:23:00 PM

Mother Nature is in league with Father Time. He's steadfast, and so very patient, she is more of a live wire. They compliment each other. Man will be the first to complain of being the victim. It's due to idiocy attached to greed and actions. Dump garbage into the water, then complain that there are plastics in the fish? A powerful Senryu, Daver! Keep well, best wishes. love, Mikki

Daver Austin
Date: 8/21/2016 4:18:00 PM

Yes, there are no broken lines in nature. She is roundly wonderful. Thank you, dear buddy.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/20/2016 9:00:00 PM

Nature is much more powerful than man and I think many more people need to realize that... You bring an important lesson to our attention with this poem. Great work, Daver!