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The Hunter

The evening shadows move through the branches to the top. All through the winters' night the cold white crystals fall, they seldom stop. No rest on upper branch or lower limb you see. but gently fall from limb to limb to plant themselves on me. And there they grow, and others come to rest on cap and boot and upturned coat till all in white i'm dressed. And not a bird or beast within the wood could see or hear so still there in the snow beside the tree I stood. But now it's time to go! I'd watched old sol up in the sky till winter's darkness drowned his bright red face; I'd stood and watched him die. Now, walking from the wood, with only moon's pale light to see. The crisp chill sound of winter's booted feet speak mockingly to me. For I must go! Return to life's dull roll. The dumb things of the wood I leave behind all pity me I know!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/4/2015 9:07:00 PM
JOSEPH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**
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Joseph Leidig
Date: 8/7/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thank you for choosing "The Hunter" as a featured poem. I appreciate the honor and am pleased that this is the second poem you have featured from my works. JHL
Date: 7/8/2015 3:24:00 PM
The Hunter is only one of the poems from my book "The Little Book of Writings" which also contains some prose and short stories. The poem was written after I went hunting near Cataract Ind. While I was hunting we got a light mist coming down on the snow where it froze making a crust. Walking out of the woods my feet "crunched" as they broke through the crust and the sentence " the crisp chill sound of winters booted feet" popped into my head and I wrote the poem around that sentence.
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Date: 7/7/2015 1:48:00 PM
Joseph, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Joseph Leidig
Date: 7/7/2015 2:10:00 PM
Thank you, It is only one of the poems from my book "The Little Book of Writings" I look forword to a fine relationship with Poetry Soup. I have already increased my membership to "premium" hoping to get more exposure. Joe

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