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The House

The house stood lonely on the hill its shadows long in moonlights spill an eerie wind that makes bones chill, echoes of souls that scream out shrill. To tell the pain that they had borne when in this place their bodies torn, then broken left in hell to mourn and never see another dawn. In their chains and shackles bound down darkest dungeons they were found, their bones and rags upon the ground and here they stay, still hanging round. To meet and greet with lonesome moan those who dare their prison roam, with croaks from throat and creaks from bone from spending centuries on their own. I wish that I could free their plight, that I could change the wrongs to right to rest their souls and end their fight and make their peace, this very night. I hope that one, alas not me, can come and set their nightmare free, if that’s God's will, then it shall be, ...........but maybe not this century. Ivor G Davies

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Date: 2/14/2016 12:55:00 PM
(I owe you a message - life has had me everywhere but on Soup, please grant me patience.) I adore your writing and this is no exception, you keep your rhythm and rhyme scheme without forcing sentences or losing intent. Your ways make the reading compelling, but easy, deep, but followable (I made that word up). You are a natural's natural - ponder that ... CayCay
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Ivor Davies
Date: 2/14/2016 1:03:00 PM
I know the feeling, life gets in the way it's a wonder I ever have time to get on Soup. I think it took me many months to reply to your last message so hear from you when you can.... thanks Ivor

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