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Now as i weave my poetry, he says to me "You look good beautiful From the tips of your fingers to the ends of your nails" I smile back and continue to my second stanza I'll give you my beauty for free, i think painfully If you can erase all my hurt All my brokeness For beyond my shellac There is a tarmac road full of potholes and cracks And i wish you could see that I wish you see me that way because am not fully put together The foundation hides, that which i wish you could love The eyeliner drives, that which is not there Read my poems Read me Read my pain and then love me

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Date: 12/24/2015 6:39:00 AM
This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/25/2015 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Funom. Merry christmas and happy new year too
Date: 12/5/2015 4:08:00 PM
Excellent, Njeri! You have retained your personal style of writing, and built on it! #7 Regards // paul
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/20/2015 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Paul. I appreciate the visit and the 7
Date: 12/4/2015 4:39:00 PM
A very good introspective piece Njeri, very emotive//blessings
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/20/2015 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Lewis. Blessings to u too:-)
Date: 12/4/2015 2:51:00 PM
This is deep Njeri - I find writing so therapeutic and you sure penned 'beauty therapy' here :-) hugs jan xx7
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 12/4/2015 3:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. I always appreciate your support. God bless

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