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The Heavens Sigh Snow

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**Again, I never experienced the winter season.. :) I just rely to what I read, I see from pictures and movies... =`)

THE HEAVENS SIGH SNOW F r e e z i n g falling gems from good heavens sigh, smooth-clear and shining coating all the world: a canvass of white. Persons s e e i n g, snowman trees line sugar shade lake, do skylark glee... Skates and skis, snowball fights, fireplace nights. W~i~n~t~e~r dreaming fires! __________________________________ ~Sponsor Broken Wings Contest Name Trashed #4~ __Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__ 8:25 pm, November 11, 2015

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Scott Williams

Date: 12/8/2015 10:34:00 PM

Just reading this makes me shiver. Very well done. Congrats on your win.

Skat A

Date: 12/8/2015 12:56:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations, SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 12/8/2015 11:53:00 AM

Olive, congratulations on your win!

Lin Lane

Date: 12/8/2015 5:21:00 AM

Great write and win, Olive.. I need to try this form. Congratulations.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/8/2015 4:00:00 AM

The form, picture and words are beautiful! Congrats for your placement, Olive!

James Fraser

Date: 11/20/2015 3:59:00 PM

The shape's delightful little one, and the imagery reminds me of Scotland in the snow of which you'll witness soon. Snowball fights aplenty :P ~~ love it // hugs James xxxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2015 4:00:00 PM

Olive, to answer the question you asked below.The only other form I can think of is all at the left margin.But with this form you chose, I believe it's preferred to do it exactly as you did it!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2015 2:00:00 PM

Ahh!! Great Diminished Hexaverse..Hot Chocolate and popcorn create a winter retreat..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

James Inman

Date: 11/17/2015 9:06:00 AM

Love the poem Olive. Some really good lines.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/17/2015 6:37:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/30/2015 2:15:00 AM

thanks much Ravi... =`)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/17/2015 6:13:00 AM

What a title! For one who has never seen snow, this is exquisitely worded and although you posted pictures, there was no need because you painted the scene to perfection...God bless you dear lady - Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/30/2015 2:13:00 AM

thanks much Tim you always boost my confidence... =`)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/16/2015 9:04:00 PM

A lovely, winter scene, Olive, and I love the form! Like you, I grew up in a tropical climate so I have to use my imagination, too. Big hugs and thanks again for your visit, Rhonda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/20/2015 8:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Rhonda, I appreciate your kindness.. =`) hugs too and thanks!!!

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/16/2015 6:29:00 PM

Hi Olive, nice poem, we don't get snow in this part of Oz but I experienced it while I was in UK and loved it, you have described snow very well in this piece, hope you are well, take care......Vera

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/19/2015 4:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Vera am so pleased with your comment here.. =`) I am well thank you.. =`)~Olive Eloisa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2015 6:11:00 PM

It's not only nice to read but it has such a cute form! Like an upside down pine tree in the snow!! I really like this.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/16/2015 7:00:00 PM

Andie, I love how you see a poem... =`) I'm somewhat puzzled what form shall I do to make it different in the presentation using a form... so happy you observe the look of a pine tree.. =`) weeee~Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/16/2015 5:36:00 PM

Very lovely, Olive_eloi! Your imagery dresses this winter poem in a white landscape. Like you, I never experience snow except when I went on top of mountains, abroad. In Malta it never snows! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/17/2015 6:21:00 AM

Aha so you also do hiking Paul, how well rounded you are.. =`) thanks so much for this generous comment. =`) hugs!!!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Tim Smith

Date: 11/16/2015 3:44:00 PM

Nothing better than a roaring fire on a wintry night sipping hot chocolate.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/17/2015 6:19:00 AM

I agree to your choice Tim, =`) though i never experienced snow and sometimes during December to February it gets cold here i prefer hot chocolate.. =`)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/16/2015 10:45:00 AM

Glorious to view but not fun to shovel for sure. This is lovely Olive! Cool form too!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/17/2015 1:39:00 AM

I agree with you Connie, we have some relatives in Alaska and then at New Zealand and they sometimes share their difficulty when snow gets too harsh... thank you//=`)

Kim Shaw

Date: 11/16/2015 10:26:00 AM

The perfect genre for this exceptional poem, Olive. I so enjoyed the imagery. Hugs, Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/16/2015 7:16:00 PM

Thanks much Kim.. =`) nice to see you on my page again.. =`)~O.E.