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The Halls of Deception

In shadows deep, they weave their cunning guise With silver words and false, beguiling eyes Their smiles, a mask, concealing hidden schemes Deceptive hearts, where selfish ego secrets scream A puppeteer of trust and empathy Beware the charm that hides a wicked plan For in their web, they will steal your soul Let wisdom's light can pierce deceit's dark veil Expose the lies, and truth at last shall prevail Shine the light, on the darkness of silent beasts

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/26/2024 5:35:00 AM

Ah, the proverbial snake oil salesmen. It’s good to avoid them whenever possible

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/6/2023 1:10:00 PM

A powerful write with a great ending. Deception is everywhere. One can only have truth with truthful people. Everyone had rather lie. So Sad... Have a wonderful/blessed~~day/weekend....................

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:05:00 AM

I can not believe how many comments I missed, I feel so bad replying so late, thank you very much.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/2/2023 3:54:00 AM

Ooh this is good!

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:05:00 AM

Thank you :) :)

Arlo Parker

Date: 9/21/2023 11:17:00 PM

Quite topical on Soup. Deceptive poets can ravage a poetry community quickly. Stand firm for site integrity. :o)

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/29/2023 11:10:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2023 4:49:00 PM

Aysha this is a thought provoking piece, I hope this is read far and wide on soup and people aren't blinded by the puppeteers pulling their strings. hugs jan xx

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/29/2023 11:10:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I am new here, I hope to read poems from many of you here. Have a wonderful day.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/18/2023 5:03:00 PM

Powerful and insightful poetry, Aysha. I'll be following your poetry. Bill

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/29/2023 11:08:00 PM

You are very kind Bill, I hope you are doing well.

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/18/2023 8:32:00 AM

"Shine the light, on the darkness of silent beasts" Aysha , your poetry expresses that which needs to be heard from the demeaners. One doesn't believe until they personally have the mean-spirited come at them. I wish you well and safe from poisoned pens! ~Anaya

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/29/2023 11:08:00 PM

Thank you Anaya L)

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2023 4:45:00 AM

The world is full of narcissists and so called puppet masters... in a patriarchal world sadly the female is targeted too much.. great poem

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/29/2023 11:07:00 PM

Very kind of you, and yes I agree.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/17/2023 1:42:00 AM

I know so many puppeteers of truth and empathy, they preach what they refuse to practice and yes, eventually truth comes out, no evil stays hidden for too long. Beware of rosy lips and smiles, theres thorns and thistles beneath them, not every sweet smile wishes you well. Loved reading this. Nice to meet u

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/29/2023 11:06:00 PM

Thank you, very wise words, hugs.

Aurore Severo

Date: 9/16/2023 11:55:00 PM

I can really relate to this poem, loved it.

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/20/2023 1:21:00 PM

Is always nice when you know others can relate to your own feelings and emotions.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/16/2023 11:42:00 PM

A deep poem that exposes the evil that men do. Yet, as you wrote, truth shall prevail and win the ultimate battle. Great muse.

Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/20/2023 1:21:00 PM

Thank you Victor