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The Green of Spring

Hidden in the dark But drawn to the light It’s worth the effort That’s it! You’ve got this! All is possible So far, so good Still believing Struggling upward New and shiny Bashful sprouts Unfurled leaves Wobbly legs Hopeful Promise Spring! April 26, 2019 Diminished Hexaverse About Spring Poetry Contest Caren Krustsinger, Sponsor

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Date: 4/28/2019 1:27:00 PM
Great narrative here. Actually a tear-jerker of sorts for me. Love a happy ending too! G.L. in the contest! :) gw
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Date: 4/28/2019 3:30:00 PM
thank you Gershon for your lovely comment :) ~ps
Date: 4/27/2019 12:35:00 AM
A very uplifting description, words very well chosen indeed. Nice write, PS.
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Date: 4/27/2019 7:22:00 AM
Thank you so much :) -ps
Date: 4/26/2019 10:13:00 PM
P. S., very positive and encouraging. Spring has sprung! ~Mark
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Date: 4/26/2019 11:16:00 PM
Thank you Mark! Yes spring has spring and what a bummer summer fast on its heels ;)

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