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The Garden of the Soul Nourish and Admire

The Garden Of The Soul Nourish And Admire With gratitude the soul shall respire As the divine fountains ooze many blessings The garden of the soul nourish and admire You shall reap joy of life and kind feelings. ***** A Deep Feeling So Divine Love, in words, if only I can define A human power, a deep feeling so divine Strong bonds of life and bliss shared In Love, unabating drifts would be dared. Lind30 Wordcount and Rhyme ******** With Verve Huge Of Me In Verse Within each word my thoughts rhyme With verve huge of me in verse The highest I strive to climb In poetry soul I would immerse. ***** I See Beauty In Mankind I see beauty in mankind As bliss and pain are aligned I see Light blooms in true heart As seeds of Love yields a work of art. ***** Lind30 Rhyme (7,7,7,9)

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/28/2023 4:35:00 PM

Lovely verses, Besma. I enjoyed reading the Lind 30 Rhymes today. I don't know why Poetry Soup never accepted the form. I wrote about 20 of them as other. I wish they'd change their minds on this form. It gave a poet four choice to write with. Thanks for honoring Robert by using his form my dear friend. Hugs, Bill

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/20/2023 10:32:00 AM

You have the soul of a poet, Bill.. you venerate the word and you honour with humility the poet.. what is most important is that we keep raising the voice of unique and genuine poetry that speak to our depth, feelings and thoughts.. thank you so much for al that you grant me of precious a word and time. My deepest regards and blessings.

John Watt

Date: 7/22/2022 12:24:00 PM

Besma, you are true poetess of the soul. It is such a blessing to see your wisdom distilled into brief dewdrops of bliss. I love the garden analogy and your acknowledgment of the Divine influence over all beauty, pain, poetry, pleasure, and relationships. So enjoyed reading this today. God's rich blessings to you ~ John

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/7/2022 8:34:00 AM

Truly an immense pleasure, an honour and a blessing to read your so wonderful and heartwarming words of praise and compliment, John.. I'm deeply humbled and grateful to you for such a rewarding and encouraging comment! Coming from a poet of grandeur, of fine inspiring and profound poetry.. it means a lot to me.. thank you so much for flooding my heart with joy and my mind with satisfaction.. God bless you.. My deepest regards and blessings.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/3/2022 5:13:00 PM

OH yes, there's beauty all around; the soul sees what the eyes may not. Enjoyed.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/7/2022 8:28:00 AM

So happy to have my humble words pour joy into your beautiful soul, M.L. Kiser.. thank you so much for the honour of your visit and rewarding feedback! My deepest regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/17/2022 8:06:00 AM

Dear Besma, this is very exceptional in its beauty. Several beautiful poems have been written in this new style, and this one is just another treasure in the collection. Besides, you have a good sense of perspective. The beauty of a garden, the beauty of heavenly sentiments, and the beauty of humanity are all beautifully explored.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/20/2022 12:59:00 PM

I highly treasure your wonderful words of praise and recognition, Lasaad.. I wanted to try the new form created by Robert Lindley, it is truly inspiring! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit and great support.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Valsa George

Date: 1/14/2022 8:45:00 PM

Here in Poetry Soup what splendid variety of poems and poets.... lifting one to the measureless space of delight. This is one such instance... when I read these gems. All are equally brilliant, especially the second and last.... ! Thanks Besma for allowing me a divine experience.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/15/2022 2:02:00 AM

I wholeheartedly agree with you on the richness, kindness, generosity, humility, Beauty, artistry of so many dear friends and fellow poets here on PS with their so worthy and fine poetry! Truly I find it so hard to keep up with such a wonder here! At the same time I acknowledge that I have been reaping an abundance of beauty from all the unique and genuine seeds they never cease to sow here on PS path and land.. I'm deeply grateful to all the dear poets from whom I have been learning a lot! Befriend the wise and be one! Dear Valsa, you are one of the amazing dear poets who I am honoured and blessed to befriend and learn from.. Thank you so much for all that you bring to my soul.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/14/2022 4:52:00 PM

I am amazed that you have given us these four very fine poems in the new poetry form my friend. I totally agree with the two enlightened comments made by my very talented friends, Vijay and Tom. Each one a wonderfully crafted gem and you have my sincere thanks for this gift given. A much very fine fav. God bless..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/15/2022 1:47:00 AM

Such honouring recognition coming from a poet of grand calibre is a tremendous honour and a so deep joy! I never cease to learn from the wealth of your poetic soul and the beauty of the human in you.. Thank you so much, Robert for the huge Light you set on my poetic soul and the beauty you add to my humble poetry.. I am the one blessed and honoured.. deeply humbled and grateful. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/14/2022 5:18:00 AM

A splendid write in this new form (both wordcount, and syllable count), Besma. Beauty of garden, divine feelings, beauty of mankind--all wonderfully explored.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/15/2022 1:37:00 AM

So wonderful and delightful are your words of praise and your eloquent appreciation, dear Vijay! I am so much obliged to you for always being here to read my humble words and kindly and generously gift me your support and honouring feedback.. thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2022 4:24:00 AM

I've seen a lot of brilliant poems written in this new form and this is another gem. Well composed Besma. I hope your new year is off to a good start and that you are keeping well. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/15/2022 1:29:00 AM

So much elated and humbled by your so rewarding compliment, Tom! I hold so dear such an appreciative and generous feedback.. Thank you so much for your continuous encouragement and great support.. My deepest regards and blessings.