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The Friend

THE FRIEND He’s always hanging around Smiling Sometimes I think he’s a bit mentally weak For looks – if you can get past the constant smiling – i’d say he’s nice featured But his clothes are well nothing particular When he talks to me It’s always a question What do I think about this about that? I try to be evasive Walk the other way But then I keep running into this guy I’m kind of a stand-off person Don’t have any real tight friends But those I know don’t think of me as weird I hope! So this – what could you call it but stalking – has gone on for weeks Now this morning I’m deep in thought Listening to one of the little groups that gather in the hall These kids are looking serious They say this kid some kid some weirdo Hung himself in his bedroom last night Dave Austin

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Date: 10/21/2015 6:30:00 AM
One never really knows, Daver.
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Date: 10/16/2015 8:30:00 PM
Daver,I remember this one from PFT. It has such an impact. It's really good!!
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Date: 10/11/2015 5:59:00 AM
What a powerful story, sad but with such truth!
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Date: 10/7/2015 3:16:00 PM
Honey, I'm home...:)) Sheesh, this is horribly sad, though those gunman rampages can be thought of as even more sick and sad.:( I don't think of you as "a stand-offish person", perhaps reserved? Being reserved is a safe place to be. I've known some who have committed suicide. Friends who sought this avenue as a personal release.:(( I think I'd read a story by Mac Avoy...."the may have, could have, might have, should have". A recipe for self madness and destruction? Missed you! love, Mikki
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Date: 10/6/2015 2:01:00 PM
Hi Daver, that is sad. To even say, he shunned away by others who are not weird is the reality of this. I don't like the suicide subject.... Thank you for sharing. SKAT
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Date: 10/7/2015 9:53:00 AM
Better suicide than shooting dozens of people, eh. No matter. Sick. Thanks for looking me up. Love, daver
Date: 10/6/2015 12:53:00 PM
Such a descriptive write I can picture this person so vividly- a tragic scenario Daver. I have also written about suicide in a recent poem - such an emotive subject:-( hugs Jan xx7
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