The Fog

~ The fog this morn is very thick with skies a soupy mess So hard to see these country roads my eyes under duress No sun can break these clouded views as I go on my way Just searching for a hint of light this chilly break of day When suddenly across my mind such visions do appear To tell me deep within my heart your smile is always near Though mist may cover up this road I’m soon to realize That when I stop to think of you there’s always a sunrise ~

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Hello There

Date: 11/19/2019 10:51:00 PM

Now, that is some positive thinking, Chris! Sometimes, we forget all it often takes to turn things around is a shift in thinking... Beautifully said!

Chris Green
Date: 11/20/2019 7:31:00 AM

That's it my friend. Positive thoughts bring positive results...I am positive of that. : )

Pat Adams

Date: 11/19/2019 8:46:00 AM

Another one that really puts you there! Well done Chris!........80)

Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2019 8:55:00 AM

Thanks so much Pat

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/19/2019 12:53:00 AM

Very nicely done...

Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2019 8:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/18/2019 11:37:00 PM

Such warm thoughts. Love it, Chris. God bless you, Gina

Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2019 8:14:00 AM

Thank you for always being so kind Gina

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/18/2019 7:11:00 PM

A thought of someone and a smile can certainly bring a sunrise at any time and you have shown this perfectly in this poem. Well written Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Hope you have a beautiful sunrise too.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/18/2019 5:04:00 PM

From a soupy mess to a sunrise! Awesome!

Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2019 8:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 11/18/2019 2:20:00 PM

Great write as always Chris. As Gershon says 'keep waving that magic poetry wand' - concur completely. Best...Ron :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 2:31:00 PM

Thanks so much Ron. I will do my best.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/18/2019 1:03:00 PM

Keep waving that magic poetry wand, my friend. Lovely! Cheers, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 1:08:00 PM

Thanks my friend. I figured you'd get tired of these by now. : )

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/18/2019 12:37:00 PM

Great write Chris - a special person in ones life can be like a guiding star. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 12:57:00 PM

Thank you again for your wonderful comment on my poem. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2019 11:31:00 AM

- Although the fog is thick like pea soup ... you have the sun in your heart, Chris :) - A sweet and wonderful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 11:44:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I appreciate you.

Na Na

Date: 11/18/2019 11:22:00 AM

Hi Chris and you are right. When you have the love of the one your with you can break through any obstacle. Well said my friend. Thanks for sharing this

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 11:43:00 AM

Thanks so much Greg. I am glad you liked it.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/18/2019 9:15:00 AM

sounds like the weather wasn't offering up any sunshine but glad you found a way to make you own....your poem shines beautifully my friend... love the way you penned this one.... hugs, Good Morning Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 10:16:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. Yep, a foggy morning drive today. I always smile when you stop by. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Dm Babbit

Date: 11/18/2019 9:12:00 AM

Sun shines on your poem. Oh, happy day.

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 10:15:00 AM

Thank you for you kind comment

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/18/2019 9:10:00 AM

Beautiful, Chris. Lovely.

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 10:14:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/18/2019 8:51:00 AM

WoW! Chris, I like the turn of events in this well written piece. The sky was cloudy and gray. But thinking of someone special brought the sunshine. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 11/18/2019 10:14:00 AM

I hope you have a great day too Alexis. Thank you so much.