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Death, the final frontier? A nest is round. Our nest the Earth is round like all the stars and planets. All things are orbital, even time and space. Let us analyse life and death like night and day or water and vapour! But, this time see death as the day and life as the night. So in our day, we see all things clearly, and in our night we are blindly stumbling, or lost in a dream. The water we can see as life this time, running always downhill subject to the gravitational pull. The vapour is our spirit free of all Earthly bonds. But, this too is a cycle continually reverting back and forth. As the vapour raises towards the sky it is collected by the clouds. Thus returning to Earth again as rainwater. One major point to always remember in "life" also is that you cannot create or destroy energy! It only transforms.

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/11/2018 3:31:00 AM

More to come, I borrowed his tin foil hate and am currently in touch with bugs bunny and the Easter bunny. LMAO

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/11/2018 3:29:00 AM

Leviticus 21:19-23 19 no man with crippled foot/ hand, who is a hunchback or a dwarf, or who has any eye defect, or who has festering or running sores or damaged testicles.21 defect; he must not come near to offer the food of his God. 22 He may eat the most holy food of his God, as well as the holy food; 23 yet because of his defect, he must not go near the curtain or approach the altar, and so desecrate my sanctuary. I am the Lord, who makes them holy

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/11/2018 3:26:00 AM

Oh Great White Wolf I have been converted, such verse!!!! Leviticus 21:14 He must not marry a widow, a divorced woman, or a woman defiled by prostitution, but only a virgin from his own people, Leviticus 21:17 "Say to Aaron: 'For the generations to come none of your descendants who has a defect may come near to offer the food of his God.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/6/2018 10:21:00 PM

I wonder? Does God also delete his comments? Never trust a god or a man that cant stand by his words.

White Wolf
Date: 8/6/2018 10:35:00 PM

Touche, my friend, touche!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/6/2018 10:32:00 PM

I will never wash away words, if I made a wrong stance or statement I would post a correction, so show that anyone can be wrong, even me! LOL, In this new world of internet tooo many lash out, insult, and belittle, and then think they can hide under a rock and not face the hurt they have caused. Its no different than wearing a mask as you attack someone. Its wrong, its malicious, you will notice they all run in the end.

White Wolf
Date: 8/6/2018 10:27:00 PM

Change is always a good thing, Art! Sometimes words SHOULD be washed away... After all, words are just the wheels that make the tracks, and tracks always overgrow when the wheels stop rolling. But I do get your point /|\

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/5/2018 3:02:00 AM

White Wolfe, is obvious you have the wisdom , quite frankly some do lack, you can never win any debate with an extremist, more importantly, you can never reason with man who possess no heart, rather than pray to fantasy, love life with a good heart and open arms.

White Wolf
Date: 8/5/2018 3:18:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! Don't underestimate yourself /|\

Tim Smith

Date: 8/4/2018 4:38:00 PM

I love your thoughts

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/9/2018 1:14:00 AM

Thank you, my thoughts are so beautiful I know!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2018 2:08:00 AM

powerfully penned thought provoking poem WW. FYI I'm very cosy in our 'nest' but know sadly one day I will fall from it:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/17/2018 3:24:00 AM

Hi Jan, yes someone emailed me, so funny, I quote Harper lee once, and the other quotes bible verse how many times? One has to ask, why do the self righteous always need to slander and lie? Curious

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/3/2018 11:08:00 PM

“Sometimes the Bible in the hand of one man is worse than a whisky bottle in the hand of (another)... There are just some kind of men who - who're so busy worrying about the next world they've never learned to live in this one, and you can look down the street and see the results.” A quote by Harper Lee, obviously a very intelligent woman!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2018 2:11:00 AM

I'm pretty blessed as I hold neither bible nor Whisky Art lol, love the quote you should write a poem on that one lol:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Ella

Date: 8/3/2018 9:41:00 PM

A very thought provoking poem! I think you are right about energy. Love this my friend :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/3/2018 9:36:00 PM

Very contemplative and inspiring poem. I am not sure if I would ever use the bible as any kind of a scientific reference, and oh ya, the earth revolves around the sun, not the other way around. LMAO

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/9/2018 1:16:00 AM

Doesn't matter the version, a fairy tale is a fairy tale, and some have wisdom's in them, some just bias and hate. You will notice the followers though lean towards the narrow hate side! LOL

Brendan Solomon
Date: 8/3/2018 9:39:00 PM

I'll have to go check my bible on that? What edition would I find the truth? lol

Alycia Wheatley

Date: 7/25/2018 11:36:00 AM

Made me travel to the stars!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/15/2018 3:25:00 PM

E=mc2

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/14/2018 10:27:00 AM

The cycle of life, all is everchanging to be the same, one with creation. Well done my friend...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/11/2018 8:13:00 AM

This made me think of Star Trek. We are heading to an alien world or worlds. We can either welcome the adventure or fear it. Thanks for the visit and comment.