Home » Poems » John Freeman » The Female

The Female

Because the Fe is before the Male life has a fee to be paid by the male the first shall become last the last shall become first “just like a woman!” smoo…cheese! The price for life has been paid By the upper higher grade… the “Conscience” is life persuade The sacrifice has been made Esau did not make the grade… being of the flesh persuade The male is not without the female Neither is the female without the male Reality of life is a plus and minus Conscious Love impulse unites reality of the two Just the way it is, life is not an impossible quiz The heavenly marriage Is given to encourage Love impulse is totally one Uniting the two, for life is fun Simple and direct, of flesh not a speck

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/17/2012 5:24:00 PM

Now tell me John, I'm curious if the female is the plus or the minus. You could get into trouble with this one! :) Love the threads that weave in this.

John Freeman
Date: 8/3/2016 6:03:00 PM

A spiritual level of is needed. smile

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/16/2012 11:13:00 AM

what a superb blend of man and woman, .. your verse sings!.. terrific read so creatively crafted! :) huggs!

Cindy Lu

Date: 2/15/2012 12:29:00 PM

Bibically, wo man means wound of man~ and I know you all feel it, but Adam moreso, don'tcha think? enjoyed reading your verses today, have a wonderful, rest of the day, God Bless, Cindy

John Freeman
Date: 8/3/2016 5:57:00 PM

Yes, but he did it to himself, having no previous orientation, other than "Don't eat!"

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2012 10:35:00 PM

ME LIKES this one, John. GREAT writing about the sexes right before Valentine's Day!

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/13/2012 8:02:00 PM

esaus' problem was that he was'nt the son of the promise. but like any good muslem he opened the doors of his house.

John Freeman
Date: 8/3/2016 5:54:00 PM

Good point.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/13/2012 4:50:00 PM

Nice twist on the word Fe Male and on marriage. I love my help mate sooo much. He takes his job as helper so serious and on many occasions, I wonder how I could have gotten thru my worst days without him...you are so right that marriage is arranged by God and is meant to encourage us. :) Smoooocheese, Moses!

John Freeman
Date: 8/3/2016 5:53:00 PM

A Natural marriage in its purest sense, is equal to our marriage as the Love that we are to God.

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/11/2012 3:59:00 PM

Wonderful poem John, love it Elizabeth

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/11/2012 3:58:00 PM

"Reality of life is a plus and minus - - - Just the way it is....." very well written this lines....I like yours poem John,simple and direct. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

John Freeman
Date: 8/3/2016 5:50:00 PM

Simple and direct communication, is the inner automation of superior intellect, while the exterior delivery can become ridiculously and unnecessarily complex. Do we really need the problem of carnalities' complexity?