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The Farm Gate

There's an old timber, farm gate at the end of a track. You wouldn't see it driving past unless you looked back. It's made of roughly hewn wood more than a lifetime ago, time and weather has worn it down, as the seasons ebb and flow. A rusty abandoned ute lays near, covered in pine tree nettles. Where weeds and braken make claim to it as in the earth it forever settles. Late sunlight filters through the trees, casting shadows through the gate. Where once cattle on the other side for feed would stand and wait. Young children used to play on the gate, stand and swing it open wide. Then climb through the cypress trees for another place to hide. Atop the rail the magpies perch, warbling away without refrain. Intently gazing across the fields, the kings of their domain. The children have all gone now, grown up and moved away. For many years the gate lay untouched, its frame in disarray. Who knows? maybe someone will see its worth and fix the old farm gate. Embed it back into time, for another's memories to recreate.

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Date: 9/23/2017 8:11:00 PM
Gentle, wistful, endearing poem that catches one y the art.
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Date: 9/24/2017 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Patricia, too kind
Date: 8/22/2017 10:41:00 PM
Great imagery, can definitely imagine being out wandering and running across a place like the one described, either in its prime or decayed state.
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Date: 8/24/2017 3:30:00 PM
Thank you David.
Date: 4/29/2017 5:44:00 AM
nostalgia with purpose! a seven Craig. shabbat shalom
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Date: 4/29/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Anil. Appreciate your visit.
Date: 4/21/2017 11:33:00 PM
I love this wonderful poem of yours which brought back many a great memory of swinging on a gate, that sounds like this one.
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Date: 4/22/2017 6:17:00 AM
They were made for swinging on I think. Thanks for the visit and your kind remarks
Date: 10/28/2016 5:39:00 PM
Very nice Craig. Beautiful description that took me back to my child hood. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/4/2016 1:42:00 PM
Well it seems most people have a gate they can remember fondly
Date: 10/24/2016 5:49:00 PM
This is a wonderful portrait of an object that once had great value and is now fallen into disrepair. I really like your description.
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Date: 11/4/2016 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for visiting my poem!
Date: 10/24/2016 4:54:00 PM
This old gate has brought you many nostalgic memories, Craig. It would be great were somebody else come forward to bring the place to its former glory. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/4/2016 1:43:00 PM
Cheers Paul, thanks for the visit.
Date: 10/15/2016 8:21:00 AM
Don't you ever wonder how things such as an old wooden gate evokes such a wonderful poem. Very well written I love it. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 10/17/2016 2:50:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Patricia.
Date: 10/4/2016 2:33:00 PM
reveries of old enhance our present moments..i like the mellow feel of this write, craig... very well crafted!..huggs
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Date: 10/7/2016 2:41:00 PM
Thank you nette, Appreciate your visit and comment
Date: 10/2/2016 5:37:00 AM
Your words invoke memories on both sides of the ditch. Lest we forget my friend. Caught a programme tonight on history of China. They teach history using words of poets past. Keep them coming Craig.
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Date: 10/2/2016 3:00:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comments David, Great way to teach history in schools
Date: 9/30/2016 6:37:00 AM
G'Day Craig: I do love to see relics from the past and your wonderful poem about the old gate has immortalized this scene. This image of the magpies perched there. I could hear them warbling. Made me nostalgic for Australia. A definite 7 and a Fav for me. Best Regards, SuZ
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Date: 9/30/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Suzanne for your kind comments.
Date: 9/28/2016 2:40:00 PM
a very moving write Craig - great memories so eloquently described:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:36:00 AM
Thanks Jan, appreciate your comments.
Date: 9/28/2016 2:01:00 PM
I hope that someone does just that and brings alive the farm..Enjoyed reading your work..It brought back memories of a gate of long ago.Sara
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:37:00 AM
Thank you Sara for your kind words.
Date: 9/28/2016 12:23:00 PM
Great poem well-written you have put that gate on the map People will come and look from far away just to see it. x
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:38:00 AM
Ha, Should have taken it with me last time I was there! Cheers Wendy.
Date: 9/28/2016 3:28:00 AM
Very enjoyable read.../|\
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:38:00 AM
Glad you thought so Rick, Thanks for the visit.
Date: 9/28/2016 3:25:00 AM
I really enjoyed this picture you painted with your words.
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:39:00 AM
Cheers, Richard, I must say I loved your "cats in the cradle" poem.
Date: 9/27/2016 11:44:00 PM
Craig, somehow I was moved by your vivid and precious memories. When I was young, I lived out in the country, (barns andall) We had a metal fence. My favorite place to hang out was on the gate door. lol... Anyways, I'll never know what became of the old place. A pleasure to read. Something good will come, when opportunity and vision hits. Linda
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Date: 9/28/2016 2:13:00 AM
Thanks Linda appreciate your comments and visit to my poem. Regards, Craig
Date: 9/26/2016 3:14:00 PM
It's nice to write of something that brings back nostalgic memories. Very nice and flowing.
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. Nice of you to visit my poem.
Date: 9/26/2016 8:35:00 AM
Beautiful images and fine rhyme dear, Craig. Much enjoyed!
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:26:00 PM
Cheers Demetrios, Thanks for the kind comment
Date: 9/26/2016 7:07:00 AM
Oh this is good, reminds me of so many aspects of growing up, the farm yard gate one of those, thanks craig awesome....
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Date: 9/26/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Harry. Appreciate your visit
Date: 9/25/2016 10:50:00 AM
This made me feel melancholy yet there is no indication you put it in the contest. The feel is palatable, sentiment seeps and touches the readers emotions for all things 'past.' Last line - wouldn't it be create rather than recreate since 'another' has yet to make memories? Just a side thought. I love the poem ... CayCay
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Date: 9/26/2016 5:17:00 AM
Thank you for your comments. I didn't intend it to be melancholy just good memories of my childhood. However I suppose you could glean a little sadness from this. And yes I take on board what you say about create. Thanks CayCay for your visit

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