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The Fallen

The Fallen He kneels before an oblong stone As if before a throne He dreams of days of yesteryear But glad, now he is home So many lads, had stayed behind To never leave the field And though their bodies, Lie here today Their spirits never yields He see them as, they were back then Young and strong and brave Not what lie beneath the oblong stone Below this grassy grave He knows they, are still on guard He counts them all, as kin And savers every day at home Until he joins them, once again

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Date: 5/22/2020 9:53:00 AM
Hello Jerry!! Very well-done here my friend!! A fantastic tribute for sure. Having had a full-career in U.S. Army (retiring in 1996), your rhyme verse here certainly tugged at my heart strings!! Good On Ya' Mate!! Best Always, Gary (P.S. I will write a verse on "Lucky in Love" as you suggested earlier. Should have it posted in a day or two.)
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Date: 3/24/2020 8:35:00 PM
Hello Jerry … lovely tribute indeed Jerry. On youtube, try and listen to a song called; The Band Played Waltzing Matilda; and Liam Clancy's version. It is so raw and moving - thank you Jerry - Lindsay
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/1/2020 9:36:00 AM
Hey Mate I did like you suggested and you're right, Liam is dead on (no pun intended) convincing. How are you holding up, Drought, Fire, Virus what next.....I feel like there's a poem in there somewhere ! Take care my friend
Date: 3/24/2020 12:36:00 PM
A fitting salute, well done Jerry...
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/1/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Charlie
Date: 3/24/2020 10:35:00 AM
What a great tribute to the heroes. Great poem!
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