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The Fall

The fall Brazen and greedy Living carefree on the edge The fall lies in wait

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/13/2018 9:18:00 AM
Yes it does! How we don't see the consequences to actions until it is at the end. I like this
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 7/16/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 7/13/2018 7:53:00 AM
Greed blinds so we don't see the fall creeping up in the shadows to overtake.. I loved this wonderful write, Wendy!!
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Wendy Nipas
Date: 7/13/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much.

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