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The Eyes

Better days come What a nice sunrise Struck my eyes Mystifying colours Orange with a hue of yellow Glowing as the sun Rising out the ocean Oh, my eyes will miss The wonderful things That I can only glimpse upon When the brighter day Has just begun?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2016 4:58:00 PM

this is very nice. I love bright yellows of the sun. Orange can be nice too, especially for sunsets. I sure like this.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2016 4:57:00 PM

I kept clicking on poems of yours I have seen recently so thought i would come way back to your first post.Let me read it NOW

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/12/2016 4:53:00 PM

Hi Marvin, it is always good to go back into the early poetic work for you can find some real gems and this, your first poetic song is one such gem. An excellent write my friend. So short and yet it holds so much within its words. The mind sings its many symphonies. May your Soul keep singing its poetic realities. This is a defininte seven Marvin....Mike.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2013 2:15:00 PM

MARVIN :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA

Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 1/8/2013 6:36:00 PM

Great Linda! I am very glad to be here in poetrysoup.com! I never thought I could write poems but I dreamt to become a poet! Way back in my college years I barely wrote an English sentence because I am a mathematical person....But when I change the level of my consciousness I tapped my creative self. I wrote books about the mind, consciousness, reality and many more in just 2 to 3 weeks. This life I chose is really awesome! Thank you!