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The Eyes

I like em' Thick in the thighs, the apple bottom. I like those Passionate eyes that can see through lies. Fearless, down for whatever, no matter the endeavor. Jared Pickett 3/28/2010 Asavvy1

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Date: 4/10/2010 10:10:00 PM
Haha. it's called Eyes and you are talking about her thighs right off! Very revealing about you! I love the eyes as a favorite feature of a person too. Let me go read the next part! This is good writing, Jared. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/31/2010 12:22:00 AM
You like those passionate eyes..yes eyes are truth revealers I guess..and yes some eyes can see a person deeper than others..Fearless-down for whatever,,for good and bad,for thick and thin..always there..nice thoughts here..well done..Charma
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:09:00 PM
A man after my own heart .. the eyes have it all the time... passionate eyes that can see through lies.. neat statement here my Lone Wolf friend.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/29/2010 6:27:00 AM
I especially like the last four lines.Sara
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Date: 3/28/2010 6:55:00 PM
This is a great write, Jared! Those "passionate eyes" will see the truth every time. And I admire her "fearless" quality, too. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/28/2010 5:49:00 PM
Love those 'Passionate eyes' and all the other body parts mentioned too!... Very cool poem, Jared - Tim
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Date: 3/28/2010 4:56:00 PM
having a good day it seems!!
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Date: 3/28/2010 4:53:00 PM
Pretty unique poem here Jared. I like the style and matter. Cool my friend! -Robert
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