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I just through this one out there because I felt like it not too much thought was put into it. don't worry I didn't over think it and I don't want anyone else to either.

"The Embrace" In the apathy of a corporate world Commercial here, commercial there I live within air quotes Pretending I live at all To buy, to extort, to be the product I am who they say I am All persons, so impersonal just thriving outside of nature Being the drones of love and war Working behind brick, driving inside metal? I want to live a manhood, able to love freely Without the confines of civilized space and time I have this much time to find a compatible mate I have this much geographical space to do it in On a nondescript morning the drive I drove, went passed a woman She wept herself so thoroughly on the side of the road Have run over a beaver, she wept so openly The regret, what refreshing regret so Christian-like I paused, this was what it took, a sin to make me feel And a woman to make feelings awaken me I slowed down the car in empathy, rather to join her in sorrow She looked at me, the man, to the beaver, and then within herself We all waited for someone to twitch The niche of emotion, that begun with her silence Ended with the words as I got out of the car "It's okay, it's okay, there are animals in heaven" I closed my arms around her shoulders And said goodbye to the corporate world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/27/2014 2:28:00 AM
I am not a Christian, but it doesn't take a Christian to figure out this poem is special! On my 5th year of no t.v. and man do I feel better. Things are so much more clear. Many, including my own mother swore I would not be able to know what was going on in the world. Quite the contrary. I could go on for hours....I am whatever you say I am. Great line...I believe Marshall Mathers has a song about it.
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Date: 7/17/2014 4:23:00 PM
Hi Karl, Just wanted today thanks for your comment on my poem Enjoyable. I do talk about God and love a lot but there are some poems I could recommend to you like Oklahoma: Killing Cicada Killers, or You Know Who You Are, or Strong Opinions, or Why Fireflies Dance. Hopefully these poems will bring you back for more. I have now learned to send email of PS! Yea PS! However limiting comments to so few words is a bummer. On PH comments are unlimited. Only a 'C' on comments PS.
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Date: 7/17/2014 1:31:00 PM
A priceless epiphany to match a beautiful poem Karl. Brilliant poetic parable. The Creditors of the Corporat United States do own your body, that's a legal fact, but only you can permit them to own your mind and soul. I admire how your awakening cresendos. J.A.B.
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Date: 7/16/2014 8:15:00 AM
very deep Karl and vey cleverly done ty for visiting my page I have just written a sequel to Strangely Odd hugs
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