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The Diva's Last Act

The lighting , it was over - bright. A shadow waited biding time; Scythe and satchel needed one more, (The lighting , it was over - bright) Their work done from terrorist gore. For Diva there'd be no encore! The lighting , it was over - bright, A shadow waited biding time. ~14 Jun 2016~ For Julia Ward's Contest - First Line Prompt - 2 Triolet with Rhyme Scheme ABaAaabAB 8 syllables per line checked via www.howmanysyllables.com Original sixth line: The Diva's act would be her last! (Changed to meet pure rhyme requirements of the contest )

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Date: 6/14/2016 9:39:00 PM
Very well done, Karam, good luck in the contest :-) Hugs
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Karam Misra
Date: 6/14/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. I think I'll have to revise the 6th line to meet Julia's requirement. ~karam~
Date: 6/14/2016 8:18:00 PM
Quite sinister, Karam! Great for the contest, and best wishes. Sandra
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Karam Misra
Date: 6/14/2016 8:25:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra.~karam~

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