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The Daydream

To lie in grass while warm breeze blows Just aware of a sunlit sky Slumber lightly, slowly, slightly A half dream serenades the mind To lie at peace, weightless and warm Barely know the clear blue sky Senses dim, then fade then gone To wake anew, refreshed, reborn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/23/2016 1:47:00 PM
I just had to share this my dear.....the least I could do with it
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Date: 8/20/2016 1:51:00 PM
OMG. Earthy. Organic. Created from our earth. Lying in the womb from where we came from. Loved this write. I do this all the time. Obviously you do too.
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Date: 8/18/2016 12:50:00 AM
To lie at peace, weightless and warm...........I love the imagery in this great piece.. A #7 for me.
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Date: 8/17/2016 11:41:00 PM
A light and weightless gem of a daydream. :-)
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Date: 8/15/2016 9:53:00 PM
How lovely a daydreaming day it was! So simple, so beautiful.
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William Smith
Date: 8/16/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Carole, sometimes I like to melt away, and take others with me. Glad you liked it. Tom
Date: 10/24/2014 4:55:00 PM
lovely imagery - this sounds like my idea of heaven:-)Hugs Jan xxx
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